I need your help,where are you?

To begin this small composation,I feel a bit sad, I have been joined in italki for about 4 days ,and I made a small composation here,but i waited and waited,there may be no one pay attention to me.I found that there were many foreigners asked questions,they were replied by so many chinese people,i also have done it with my efforts，so I want to say： I need your help，please give me a hand，I will be very grateful！

Cathy, my rewrite is below:

I need your help, where are you?

I feel a bit sad, I joined in italki about 4 days ago, and I made a small composition for someone to review.  I waited and waited but there has been no one to pay attention to me.  I found that there were many foreigners that asked questions.  They received replies from many Chinese people.  I, also have replied to many foreigners, so I want to say： I need your help, please give me a hand.  I will be very grateful！

Joe