I need your help,where are you?

To begin this small composition,I feel a bit sad. I have joined italki for 4 days and I made a small composition here but I waited for long and there is nobodyto pay attention to me. I found that there are many foreigners asking questions and they were replied forthwith by so many chinese people. I have also done it with my efforts，so I want to say： I need your help，please give me a hand，I will be very grateful！

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英文我定要用大字來寫.  不能有例外!

句号後定要有两个空位.

逗号後定要有一个空位.

小作 = short essay.  Small essay/composition is Chinglish!

雖然外国人是 foreigners. 在這兒用 non-Chinese 比較好因為首次看你小作時,不知道你是華人.

I need your help!__Where are you?

To begin with, when I wrote this short essay/composition small composition,_I feel felt a bit sad.__, I have been had joined in italki for about 4 four days now.__ ,and I made wrote a short essay small composation here,but and I waited and waited.__,there may be No one pay paid attention to it me.__I found that there were When many foreigners non Chinese asked questions,_they there were replied by so many Chinese replies.__ people, I also have done it with contribute my efforts. ，so I want to say： Please hear my plea: I need your help.__Please give lend me a hand,_I will be very grateful！

I agree with James assessment so I don't elaborate further.  However here's are my two cents worth.  You must remember the other way around too.  After we spent our time in correcting their essays, some of them don't even acknowledge a word of thanks.  After a while, we can usually spot those who are serious in learning or not.  There is a pattern!  At least this is how I skip them unless what they wrote are irresitable.  If you want someone to correct your entry, send them a message instead.  This way you know for sure that they won't overlook yours.  If after sending them a message and there is no reply or correction, then you know they are not interested.

There are those who are here to help you and there are those who don't.  You just have to find out who they are.

I need your help,where are you?

To begin this small composation,I feel a bit sad, I have been joined in italki for about 4 days ,and I made a small composation here,but i waited and waited,there may be no one pay attention to me.I found that there were many foreigners asked questions,they were replied by so many chinese people,i also have done it with my efforts，so I want to say： I need your help，please give me a hand，I will be very grateful！

Cathy, my rewrite is below:

I need your help, where are you?

I feel a bit sad, I joined in italki about 4 days ago, and I made a small composition for someone to review.  I waited and waited but there has been no one to pay attention to me.  I found that there were many foreigners that asked questions.  They received replies from many Chinese people.  I, also have replied to many foreigners, so I want to say： I need your help, please give me a hand.  I will be very grateful！

Joe

I need your help. Where are you?

To begin this small composation composition, I feel a bit sad. I have been joined in italki for about 4 days ago, and I made wrote a small composation composition here, but I waited and waited. There may be was no one to pay attention to me. I found that there were many foreigners asking questions and they were replied by so many Chinese people, as I have done. So I want to say： I need your help! Please give me a hand and I will be very grateful!