First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello my name is Kevin Muñoz,. I´m trying to learn  eEnglish  because I think that it is very important actually. If I speak eEnglish, I can achieve get a better job.

Good work Kevin! English is always capitalized because it is derived from a proper noun (England). Achieve coveys the right meaning but it isn't used with job. In English one gets a job and achieves a goal. This is subtle but important. Keep up the good work and let me know if you have any questions. Cheers!

My house

When you To go to my house, Yyou should go up the stairs to the 3rd floor. and When you inside to enter the flat, when you do it, It's you will be in the living room,. If you continue to walking it's going to you will be in the kitchen and the balcony. When you outside to leave the kitchen you can go to the left and there's the you will find  my parents's bedroom,. When you outside from that bedroom, Going forward from there you can go ahead and there's you will find the bathroom and to the left it's the my sister's bedroom and the right it's my bedroom.

Well done! This is a complex paragraph but adequately conveys your meaning. The corrections I made separate the ideas into discreet units to help your reader better understand your description. If you hae any questions let me know. Cheers! 

Tanta

I live in my beloved city Tanta .Tanta is the capital of Gharbia governorate.It also the the capital of Delta Nile and the fourth biggest city in Egypt.
It's famous for making oil and soap,linen and textiles.
It's about 92 k.m km from Cairo.tThere is a university here with all many specializations of studies.
We have many places to visit in Tanta e.g like El-badawy mosque which is one of the most famous mosques in Egypt.tThere is also the museum,the theater ,...etc.
The weather in Tanta is always fine,neither too hot nor too cold.It usually rains it in winter.
Tanta played a very important role in the history.sStarting from the pharaohs passing to the occupation and finally the revolution.
nNowadays we do our best to make Tanta the most beautiful city in Egypt.


please, correct the mistakes in the passage ^_^

This is very well done. I corrected some of your punctuation.

Also, I used many instead of all. All would imply every study that exists while many keeps you honest. :)

e.g. is a little pedantic and doesn't fit the tone of your journal entry.

I had some difficulty understanding the intent of your second to last sentence. When relating events one passes from one event to the next, to the next, etc.

Cheers!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i I don't want to be say something anything about me myself.

Good work!

One can still speak English without anything to say. ;)

Cheers!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I learn am learning English because it requires me to communicate with people because the English language became it is an international language and I want to be able to communicate with people. . I don't want to ignorance of the language was to be a barrier for me and for my future professions in my career.

Good work!

Adding -ing to the end of the verb forms one of the <em>progressive tenses</em>. One uses the progressive tense to talk about <em>on-going actions.</em> You are currently learning English, so it is on-going.

Also, there are two ideas in the first sentence: 1. to learn English because it is an international language and 2. to learn English because you want to communicate with people. I seperated those two ideas with an and. This helps the reader better understand what you are doing and why you are doing it. 

Was is the past tense of to be. After I want you can use the infinitive of any verb. For example: I want to run, I want to eat, I want to live.

Lastly, career is a noun that implies your future professions.

Cheers!

Today

Today is one of the hottest days I have ever known experienced. It's very difficult to stay at home and or to go somewhere. Maybe this is a good time to have a rest. I have read a magasine and now I really want to take a walk.

Good work! The corrections are subtle. One knows a fact but experiences a phenomenon. And implies taking both actions while or implies a choice. To walk is simply the action of walking while to take a walk implies getting outside to stretch your legs and get some fresh air. Cheers!