My house
When you go to my house, You should go up the stairs to the 3rd floor and you inside to the flat, when you do it, It's the living room, If you continue to walking it's going to be the kitchen and the balcony. When you outside to the kitchen you can go to the left and there's the my parents's bedroom, When you outside from that bedroom, You can go ahead and there's the bathroom and the left it's the my sister's bedroom and the right it's my bedroom.
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My house
When you To go to my house, Yyou should go up the stairs to the 3rd floor. and When you inside to enter the flat, when you do it, It's you will be in the living room,. If you continue to walking it's going to you will be in the kitchen and the balcony. When you outside to leave the kitchen you can go to the left and there's the you will find my parents's bedroom,. When you outside from that bedroom, Going forward from there you can go ahead and there's you will find the bathroom and to the left it's the my sister's bedroom and the right it's my bedroom.
Well done! This is a complex paragraph but adequately conveys your meaning. The corrections I made separate the ideas into discreet units to help your reader better understand your description. If you hae any questions let me know. Cheers!
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