Tanta

I live in my beloved city Tanta .Tanta is the capital of Gharbia governorate.It also the the capital of Delta Nile and the fourth biggest city in Egypt.
It's famous for making oil and soap,linen and textiles.
It's about 92 k.m km from Cairo.tThere is a university here with all many specializations of studies.
We have many places to visit in Tanta e.g like El-badawy mosque which is one of the most famous mosques in Egypt.tThere is also the museum,the theater ,...etc.
The weather in Tanta is always fine,neither too hot nor too cold.It usually rains it in winter.
Tanta played a very important role in the history.sStarting from the pharaohs passing to the occupation and finally the revolution.
nNowadays we do our best to make Tanta the most beautiful city in Egypt.


please, correct the mistakes in the passage ^_^

This is very well done. I corrected some of your punctuation.

Also, I used many instead of all. All would imply every study that exists while many keeps you honest. :)

e.g. is a little pedantic and doesn't fit the tone of your journal entry.

I had some difficulty understanding the intent of your second to last sentence. When relating events one passes from one event to the next, to the next, etc.

Cheers!