i think there must be a context.you should put the case more specifically. for example,you are doing Yoga, the instructor wants to tell you to make a move or maintain your position properly, he may say: control in place. that's my conjecture, accept it prudently please.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

你好。我叫爱丽丝，可是我的中国名字是王熙蕾。我正在利兹大学学习中文。今年八月我要去台湾。我会在台北学习中文八个月。我喜欢画画，烹饪，以及电脑游戏。

update :D

大家你好！对不起，我两个月没登录ITALKI了。五月份我有很多考试。如果我通过考试，我就可以在今年八月去读国立政治大学！这所大学是否很著名？我要在那儿九个月学习九个月的中文，之后回利兹大学继续学习。
我现在开始学习繁体字了。它们很难学 :(

六月十七号是父亲节。我写信给爸爸

大家好，您好吗？
这是我的第三篇作文。

六月十七号是父亲节。我写信给爸爸

亲爱的爸爸，
我爱你
祝您父亲节快乐
我想说谢谢你。
谢谢你给予我的爱。 
谢谢你对我的教诲。 
你是我的守护者， 我爱你！ 
我对你的爱每天都在增长。
再次感谢你！
父亲节快乐！ 
你的女儿

Can someone tell me the correct way to say I love you more and more everyday, I am not sure which is correct out of the three different sentences I wrote.
I would also be grateful if you could correct any mistakes I made, this is what I wanted to say.
Dear Dad
I love you,
I wish you a happy Father's Day
I want to say thank you,
Thank you for loving me
Thank you for guiding me,
You are my protector, I love you
I love you more and more everyday
Once again thank you
Happy Father's Day
Your Daughter

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

你好，我叫Shane,我的中文名字叫白龙。我是爱尔兰人。我正在学习汉语，因为有十三亿中国人说汉语。