Chinese Speech Revised

Does this sound about right? I have to give a speech in class either tomorrow or on Friday.

大家好！我叫韦凯伶。今天我的话题是照顾孩子，我的工作就是照顾孩子,我也很喜欢这份工作。我的邻居有很多孩子，我照顾的孩子的年龄段是两岁到十二岁。我常常和他们一起在他们的家玩。我一个小时转十块钱，一个星期工作十个小时。他们的父母也很乐于让我照顾他们，因为他们的孩子很爱我。我爱这些孩子。谢谢大家！

Hello! My name is WeiKailing. My topic today is babysitting. My job is babysitting, I really love this job! My neighborhood has lots of kids. I babysit children from the ages of 2-12. I often play with them at their house. I earn ten dollars an hour and I work ten hours a week. Their parents are willing to let me take care of them because their kids love me so much. I love the kids I babysit! Thanks!

I often play with them at their house.In Chinese that means "我常常和他们一起在他们家玩。".You can say "他们家" instead of "他们的家".And "earn money " translate into Chinese is "赚钱" ,not "转钱"。"赚" makes the fourth sound and "转" makes the third sound.And their meaning is also different.

推荐川菜“酸菜鱼”，“水煮牛肉”，“回锅肉”，听说外国人爱吃辣。

中国的国粹京剧很有名，也很好听，推荐《霸王别姬》，推荐版本：梅兰芳 杨小楼 1931年录音。

中国的民族音乐唯美悠扬，推荐《高山流水》，《广陵散》，《二泉映月》。

中国的流行音乐，推荐五月天的《私奔到月球》，王菲版《传奇》，李健的《心升明月》。