I agree with Jeff, however I think the sentence would read better if you said:
 

There are five members in my family: my mother, my father, my two brothers and I.

Is there anything incorrect? Thank you!

This is for my younger sister who intends to participate in an oral English test. could you help her to amend it?


Hi, everyone! My name is xxx, or you can call me xxx. I’m 8 years old and I was born in the year of the monkey. My mum says that’s why I am so active.
I’m fond of singing, painting, and reciting/elocnte. <- I don't know this?
My favorite singer, Declan Galbraith, who is a Swedish, has such a so beautiful voice that I hope that I could do as well as him someday.
Reciting makes me confidence confident, and I enjoy the feeling that of making a speech on the stage, even though I would be am a little nervous occasionally. I am only 8 years old after all.
From my pictures you would learn can see what kind of girl I am. Usually, you will find happy kiddies, twittering birdies, and bouncing puppies in my pictures. Yeah, correct! <- This sounds strange. What are you trying to say? I am a happy girl and I appreciate the happy life.
This is me, xxx. Thank you.

Hi, let me introduce myself

I think that for me it is not problem to remember some words or frases phrases in English. My is I understand english in context when one person someone is speaking with me.
I live in Chile, in Santiago City. I'm a telematic engineer and I am an owner of a little enterprise. Many times Often I need to talk with providers in USA or Europe, but my English is very basic.
If you need understand or practique spanish, I can help you.

First text in english: Introducing myself

Well... My name's is Camilo Saavedra, I live in a little city of Chile, called Linares, well... emmh I'am I am OR I'm 16 years old, I like to make music, I have a band of Christian Symphonic metal band, I like the sports, but the sport that more like me I like the most is parkour, but the only thing that's negative is that you can fall down and hurt yourself the probably of fall down and hurt you xD, well emh... I'am single alone xD ( without a girlfriend )...
I don't like the school, and that's is my life :) see you later boys (You only say 'boys' if you are only talking to makes. You can say 'everyone' or 'guys') :D

Well... My name is Camilo Saavedra. I live in a little city in Chile, called Linares. Well... emmh I'm 16 years old and I like to play/make music, I have a Christian Symphonic metal band. I like sports, and the sport I like the most is Parkour, but, the only negative is that you can fall down and hurt yourself. Well emh.. I am single (without a girlfriend)...

I don't like school, and that's my life :) See you later guys :D