Is there anything incorrect? Thank you!

This is for my younger sister who intends to participate in an oral English test. could you help her to amend it?


Hi, everyone! My name is xxx, or you can call me xxx. I’m 8 years old and I was born in the year of the monkey. My mum says that’s why I am so active.
I’m fond of singing, painting, and reciting/elocnte. <- I don't know this?
My favorite singer, Declan Galbraith, who is a Swedish, has such a so beautiful voice that I hope that I could do as well as him someday.
Reciting makes me confidence confident, and I enjoy the feeling that of making a speech on the stage, even though I would be am a little nervous occasionally. I am only 8 years old after all.
From my pictures you would learn can see what kind of girl I am. Usually, you will find happy kiddies, twittering birdies, and bouncing puppies in my pictures. Yeah, correct! <- This sounds strange. What are you trying to say? I am a happy girl and I appreciate the happy life.
This is me, xxx. Thank you.