My Family

There are five members of my family. My mother, my father, my two brothers and me. My father is retired, my mother is a housewife, my younger brother is studying business management in college and my older brother is an English teacher.

 - you can only be a member 'of' something, not 'in' something. 

I do not think you mean 'pronunciation', because that is how you say words, I think you mean 'punctuation'. Your punctuation is good. You use capital letters, full stops and commas correctly. 

I think you write to a high standard of English. Congratulations! 

I agree with Jeff, however I think the sentence would read better if you said:
 

There are five members in my family: my mother, my father, my two brothers and I.

My family

There are five member in my family. My mother, my father, my two brothers and me. My father is a retired worker , my mother is a housewife, my younger brother is studying business management in college and my older brother is an english teacher.

Can anyone correct this text please?? And what do you think about my pronuntiation??

Definitely want to say that your dad is RETIRED. :) It is standard, and everyone knows what that means.

Always capitalize the word English, no matter what. I understood you very well! Keep it up!

My family

There are five members in my family: my mother, my father, my two brothers and me. My father is a retired worker, my mother is a housewife, my younger brother is studying business management in college and my older brother is an English teacher.

Can anyone correct this text please?? And what do you think about my pronuntiation??