The next chunk is:

"The university entrance exams, are called for short as "Gao Kao" in Chinese. I don't know what it means to people other than Chinese. I had almost forgot about it, but for the pieces of news in the media surrounding the bus and subway which reminded me of it. For example, cars for the exam-taking students were priviledged to go first, or go on special lanes. Even the police would offer a hand to the students who unfortunately encountered troubles, which seemed not to be their duties on "ordinary days" though. Besides, some students were interviewed for their feelings of the exams, and the Chinese composition questions from the exam papers all over China were discussed heatedly as usual."

The university entrance exams are called "Gao Kao" (高考 gāo kǎo). [Omit the longer version because it is too much information for the reader.] I do not know how non-Chinese people view "Gao Kao" [or entrance exams? I am not clear if you mean the word "Gao Kao" itself or the entrance exams. Define "it" here.] I have recently been reminded of my college entrance exams because I have seeing notices about them in the news, in the subways, and on buses. Also, cars carrying examinees again [I assume this occurs on a regular basis, such as yearly or twice a year, or on some other regular interval.] have the privilege to go first in traffic and in some cases have special lanes. Even the police go out of their way [see http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/go-out-of-your-way?q=go+out+of+your+way, which states, "to try very hard to do something, especially for someone else
Example: They really went out of their way to make us feel welcome by giving us the best room in the house."] to assist any entrance-examination student. As usual, several students were interviewed about their feelings about the exams, and the Chinese composition questions on the exam where heatedly discussed all over China.

[Wonder insight about this part of Chinese life. Keep writing! :)]

How do I to say, "I love you." in Finnish?

I love you in Finnish is, "Minä rakastan sinua."

Suomeksi Valentine's Day on ystävänpäivä. Päivä on siis tarkoitettu ystävyyden juhlimiseen eikä niin paljon rakastav[onks tää v vai j?]aisille. Ystävänpäivänä minä aion kiittää ystäviäni siitä, että he ovat niin arvokkaita ja kertoa heille, kuinka tärkeitä he ovat minulle.

In Finnish, Valentine's day is called ystävänpäivä (friend's day). It's a day So the day is for celebrating friendship and not so that much for lovers. On Valentine's day, I plan to thank my friends for being so precious and to tell them how important they are to me.

I try to whrite something more difficult in English

Hei. Halusin sanoa että "more" täällä on sama kuin enemmän suomeksi. Siis, en voi kirjoittaa "Haluan kirjoittaa jotakin enemmän vaikeaa." Kysysmys on, että enemmän vaikeaa kuin mitä?

Älä käydä translate.google.com. Se on paska ja sinun englantia on parempi kuin sen. :)

My English studyies

I have been learning English for a long time,[space] but I can't use it very well,[space] and I fell bad.[space] mMaybe it is because that I have not chance to use it,[space] so there is no driving force, or no exercises,[space] although I have a lot of time. 

bBy italki,[space] I want to change this.

It is clear that you have something to say and have an opinion. It is not clear what those opinions are exactly, and I am curious to know.

Please rewrite this using shorter, clearer sentences. That way, I will better understand your perspective.

Some of my questions are:

* WHAT are the students studying over and over again?

* WHO is we?

* WHY is chasing your dream not a good idea?