Random thoughts

These days, I have been thinking about why there are so many of our students re-study again in our senior year of high school just because of they want to go to the best university. Sometime, we should appreciate them that they are ambitious and having a big dream but I also don't think that there will be a true judgment though.

In my opinion, we shouldn't spend too much our lifetime in doing such work. Imagine four years, five years or even more time wasted only for this. We missed too much our valuable time because chasing our dream is not only by doing that way actually.

Is this look better? I am also learning English

It is clear that you have something to say and have an opinion. It is not clear what those opinions are exactly, and I am curious to know.

Please rewrite this using shorter, clearer sentences. That way, I will better understand your perspective.

Some of my questions are:

* WHAT are the students studying over and over again?

* WHO is we?

* WHY is chasing your dream not a good idea?

random thoughts

those days ,i have been thinking about a question that why so many our students restudy again and again in our senior year in high school? just because we want to go to a key university? maybe sometimes we would prised these students that they were ambitious and have a big dream. however ,i don't think that's the true judgement, in my opinion ,we shoudn't spent our lifetime on doing such work, four years or five years and even more long time wasted on this ,we missed so much voluable time doing the intereting work.in a word, chasing our dream has not only way.