Donkey

A salt merchant lived in a village. He had a donkey. He used to load salt on the donkey. One day he was driving the donkey to his village. There was a stream on the way. The donkey slipped and fell into the water. The merchant tried to make the donkey stand, but it was very difficult. Once the donkey realized that the weight became lighter. The next day the donkey sat down in the stream on purpose. The master saw through him and decided to teach the donkey a bitter lesson. The next day he loaded the donkey two bales of cotton. The donkey as usual sat in the stream, when the donkey stood up it could not walk because of the heavy load. The donkey repented it's cleverness, and decided never to repeat this action.

Your doing great in your English writing skills. One thing that you could work on is connecting your sentences to make them sound more fluid, it would make your writing and speaking flow better. Keep it up.

The Thirsty Crow

One thirsty crow flew to and fro in search of water, but it could not find water. At last he got tired and sat on a tree. Beneath the tree, the crow saw a pitcher. The crow flew and sat on the pitcher. There was some water at the bottom. It's beak could not reach the water. Eventually, the crow came up with a good plan. There was a heap of pebbles nearby. It picked up pebbles, one by one, and dropped them into the pitcher, thus raising the water to the neck of the pitcher. The crow quench it's thirst and flew away.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

This is your original:

I`m very glad you can read me.My english name is Jack.I am a electrical engineer who is working in beijing china,27 years old.But now,I study in University of Michigan as a visiting scholar.I will come back china in Aug.After I came here,I found I should study more English,but in china,I don`t know more about that.It is my honored to make friend with you!We can talking with chinese and english,everything is OK.My E-mail is:[email protected],My QQ number is:260211711.
Best wishes.

These are the corrections:

I'm very glad you can read my entry. My english name is Jack. I am a electrical engineer who is working in Beijing, China. And I am 27 years old.But now,I study at the University of Michigan as a visiting student. I will come back to China in August. After I came here, I found out I should study more English, but in China, I don't know more about that other than that I am honored to be friends with you! We can talking in Chinese and English, everything is okay. My E-mail is: [email protected], My QQ number is: 260211711. 

Remember, after all punctuation (Periods, Commas, Colons, and Semicolons) you must leave a space. China, Chinese, English, and all such things must start with an upper case letter.

Honesty is the best policy

This one is yours:

Once a woodcutter was cutting branches of a tree beside the the bank of the river. By chance his axe fell down in water. As it was a irreparable loss for him. Therefore he started to weep bitterly. The god of water took piety on him or compassionated on him and appeared in form of human being and said" Good fellow, why are you weeping?" The woodcutter told the god his tale of woe. The god dived into water and came back with a golden axe and put it before him but the woodcutter refused to take it because it was not his axe. Next time the god came back with silver axe but he again refused to take it because his axe made of iron. Third time the god came back with iron axe. The woodcutter said,"Yes! It is my axe." The god was so happy with his honesty and rewarded him with the other two axe.

Here are your corrections: 

Once a woodcutter was cutting branches of a tree beside the the bank of the river. By chance his axe fell down in water. As it was a irreparable loss for him. Therefore he started to weep bitterly. The god of water took pity on him or compassionated on him and appeared in form of human being and said" Good fellow, why are you weeping?" The woodcutter told the god his tale of woe. The god dove into water and came back with a golden axe and presented it before him, but the woodcutter refused to take it because it was not his axe. Next time, the god came back with silver axe but he again refused to take it because his axe made of iron. Third time the god came back with iron axe. The woodcutter said,"Yes! It is my axe." The god was so happy with his honesty and rewarded him with the other two axes.

Great job! I can tell that you are almost fluent. All you need to do is watch you tenses, (Past, Present, and Future) and your pluralization of words (Adding an "S" at the end of them).

i wont to learnig uzbekit

I want to learn Uzbek

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi everybody..my name is Nurulla.and I'm16 and I'm from Uzbekistan. I study at school at 9th grade..I study English..because I like this language..and I want to improve my English.

Corrected version:

Hi everybody! My name is Nurulla and I'm16. I'm from Uzbekistan. I'm in 9th grade and I study English because I like the language. I want to improve my English.

Send me an email or message on italki if you want me to correct more of your entries. Maybe you could teach me some Uzbek aswell. Keep up the hard work and I'm glad your trying to learn English.