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donkey One Salt merchant lived in a village. He had a donkey. He used to load salt on the donkey. One day he was driving the donkey to his village. There was a stream on the way. The donkey slipped and fell into the water. The merchant made him stand with great difficulty. At once the donkey realized that the weight became lighten. Next day the donkey sat down in the stream purposely. The master saw through him and decided to teach it a bitter lesson. Next day he loaded the donkey two bales of cotton. The donkey as usual sat in the stream, when the donkey stood up it could not walked under the heavy load. The donkey repented of its cleverness and decided never to repeat this action.

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A salt merchant lived in a village. He had a donkey. He used to load salt on the donkey. One day he was driving the donkey to his village. There was a stream on the way. The donkey slipped and fell into the water. The merchant tried to make the donkey stand, but it was very difficult. Once the donkey realized that the weight became lighter. The next day the donkey sat down in the stream on purpose. The master saw through him and decided to teach the donkey a bitter lesson. The next day he loaded the donkey two bales of cotton. The donkey as usual sat in the stream, when the donkey stood up it could not walk because of the heavy load. The donkey repented it's cleverness, and decided never to repeat this action.

 

Your doing great in your English writing skills. One thing that you could work on is connecting your sentences to make them sound more fluid, it would make your writing and speaking flow better. Keep it up.

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Nice story, Ali :)
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donkey

One Salt A salt merchant lived in a village. He had a donkey. He used to load salt on the donkey. One day he was driving the donkey to his village. There was a stream on the way. The donkey slipped and fell into the water. The merchant made him stand with great difficulty. At once the donkey realized that the weight became lighten lighter. Next The next day the donkey sat down in the stream purposely. The master saw through him and decided to teach it a bitter lesson. Next The next day he loaded the donkey (with) two bales of cotton. The donkey, as usual, sat in the stream, (but) when the donkey stood up it could not walked walk under the heavy load. The donkey repented of its cleverness and decided never to repeat this action.

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One A salt merchant lived in a village. He had a donkey. He used to load salt on the donkey. One day he was driving the donkey to his village. There was a stream on the way. The donkey slipped and fell into the water. The merchant made him stand with had great difficulty making him stand. At once, the donkey realized that the weight became lighten lighter. The next day the donkey sat down in the stream purposely. The master saw through him this and decided to teach it a bitter lesson. The next day, he loaded the donkey with two bales of cotton. The donkey, as usual, sat in the stream, when the donkey stream and when he stood up it he could not walked walk under the heavy load. The donkey repented of its cleverness and decided never to repeat this action.

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