First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi everybody..my name is Nurulla.and I'm16 and I'm from Uzbekistan. I study at school at 9th grade..I study English..because I like this language..and I want to improve my English.

Corrected version:

Hi everybody! My name is Nurulla and I'm16. I'm from Uzbekistan. I'm in 9th grade and I study English because I like the language. I want to improve my English.

Send me an email or message on italki if you want me to correct more of your entries. Maybe you could teach me some Uzbek aswell. Keep up the hard work and I'm glad your trying to learn English.