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我喜欢学习英语。也喜欢帮助想学汉语的人。I love learning English and to help someone who likes Chineses either.
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    April 5, 2012
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    Friendship (Handicraft)

    Yesterday was a good day. I went to visit My my best friend, she who is a nice girl. In her house She loves to decorate her house with beautiful and handicraft things.
    She prefers plates with flowers and birds. I don't know all species specific that it is drawn. In Colombia, Wwe have a lot of handicrafts workers. They use different materials. I preference wood handicrafts, specially pencils, they are creatives and use different lively colors with beautiful forms.
    Their prices are just and economic, if you can buy some handicrafts I'm sure you enjoy this.

     

    1. I think your entry is writen on handicraft rather than friendship, so I give you a different title.

    2. All the corrections made by me may not be all right, so you can't take them serious:) Here, I also expect someone correct mine.

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    March 30, 2012
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    March 23, 2012
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    March 23, 2012
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    她飞快地跑回家。她妈妈一开门她就高兴地对她说：“我考过了！”
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    March 6, 2012
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    签证得到了

    去个星期我把签证等。 星期二老板告诉我签证得到了。 然后我星期三开始工作。 所以我现在很忙但是也很高兴。 虽然我找到工作， 可是我六个月以后得找新的（因为这个工作是暂时的）。

     

    Hi, Ryan, It's a good news. Congratulation! I don't try to correct your essay but rewrite it as below:

     

    Got the Visa 签证拿到了

     

    I had been waiting for my visa until my boss told me that it was done this Tuesday.

    我一直等到本周二老板才告诉我，我的签证已经办妥了。 

    Since I have already start my job from Wednesday, now I am very busy but happy.

    因为星期三我就已经开始工作了，所以我现在很忙，但是也很高兴。

    Although I have now got a job but I have to look for a new one after six months, because this is a temporary job. 尽管我已经找到了工作，可是六个月后我得另找一份新的，因为这是一份临时工。

     

    Is it alright?

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    March 3, 2012
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    这个日子： 我做什么东西 如何度过这些日子

    (From your essay I can guess your confusion. 这个 is used to describe a single day and 这些 is used to describe some days.)

    这个日子- 冬天（不是真的“冬天” 因为新加坡天天很热） 有一点奇怪。 这些日子让我觉得有点艰难，就像处于寒冬（虽然新加坡的冬天还是很热）。我学完了我的MA可是我必须到7 月才能等我毕业。 我要工作，1）可是找到工作很难， 因为我没有经验，而且我也是还是外国人。

    两个星期以前我找到了工作。 我还没有不会开始，因为我得等签证。 我有一点害怕被新加坡政府驳回我。

    所一我不知道做什么。 除了等。

    1）You must put a comma between two different meanings. And 而且... 还是... is used to express the second reason.

    Don't feel too much nervous. As we Chinese says: 不患人不知，患已不能也。It means that don't be afraid to be not known, just care about your own ability. And correct my english if you free.

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    February 25, 2012
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    Farewell When I heard the news that the famous American singer, Whitney Houston has dead this morning, I got a little shock. Just at the begining of Chinese New Year, I heard that the man, who had translated the song “when you believe” to me, had been engaged to someone. We started our affair after the translating. Now I knew I have to say goodbye to a feeling on him. Whether “I will always love you”? I do don’t know. Do you think the death of Whitney Houston and the engaged man is a coincidence in my life? So I want ot translate the poem “Farewell” to mark them. 今天早上，当听到著名美国歌星，惠特妮 . 休斯顿去世的消息，我有一点点震惊。就在新年伊始，我听说那个给我翻译《当你相信》的歌词的人已经订婚了。我们的感情始于那次翻译后。现在我知道，我得向和他的一段情说再见了。是否“我将一直爱你”？我真的不知道。你们觉得惠特妮 . 休斯顿的死和那个已订婚的人是不是我生命中的一个巧合？于是，我想翻译这首《送别》诗来纪念一番。 Farewell (by XiMuRong) 送别 （席慕容） Not all the dreams will come true in time 不是所有的梦都来得及实现 Not all the words can be timely said to you 不是所有的话都来得及告诉你 Guilt and regret 疚恨（内疚和悔恨） Are always ingrained in my heart after parting 总要深植在离别后的心中 Though they say尽管 他们说 Everything of the world must finally end to nothing 世间种种最后终必成空 I am not so determined as to let it slip 我并不是立意要错过 But 可是 I’m destined to do such a thing all the time 我一直都在这样做 To miss the flowery yesterday 错过那花满枝丫的昨日 And to miss it again, today 又要 错过今朝 Today, we have to make the same parting once more 今朝仍要重复那相同的别离 Like strangers, for the rest of our life 余生将成陌路 Thousands miles between 一去千里 Let me make a deep bow to you in the dusky mists 在暮霭里向你深深俯首 Take care for me, please 请 为我珍重 Though they say 尽管 他们说 Everything of the world must finally 世间种种最后终必 finally come to nothing 终必成空
    February 12, 2012
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    January 12, 2012
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    Drinking Alone Under The Moon One night in the spring, the moonlight looked very bright, and I felt good. So carrying with a pot of wine, I came to the garden set by the flowers. After having drinked a cup of wine, I wanted to talk to somebody particularly. But there was nobody but me in the garden. I looked at the bright moon, and she seemed gazing at me silently and to be understand what I was thinking about. I held up the cup to the moon and said “Come on for a drink together!” When I held the cup to my lips headdown I saw my shadow. Suddenly, I didn’t feel lonely. Three persons now, the moon, my shadow and I！ Could the moon drink? Certainly not. And the shadow just followed me walking around. Let it be! I must made shift with them to enjoy myself in time on spring. The moon wondered from treetop to housetop while I was singing; And the shadow changed in riotous profusion while I was performed swordplay. We were very happy indeed while I was awake. Afterward, I got drunk and they went off. My forever bosom friends, fair moon and my lovely shadow, you made me forget all of common customs. How I wish to meet you always beyond the removed clouds! This essay translated from a chinese ancient poem. Do you know who the poet was? 月下独酌 在春天的一个夜晚，月光非常明亮，我的心情也很不错。于是，带上一壶酒，我来到花园里，坐在花丛旁边。喝下一杯酒后我特别想和人说说话。可是，花园里除了我，一个人都没有。我望着皎洁的月亮，而她好像也在默默地注视着我, 好像她明白我的心思似的。我对着月亮举起酒杯，说：“一起来喝一杯吧？！”我低着头把酒杯放进嘴里的时候我看见了自己的影子。突然间，我不再感到孤单。现在有三个人！月亮，我的影子和我！月亮会喝酒吗？当然不会。那影子也只是会跟着我转悠。管它呢！我就将就他们在春天里及时行乐吧。 我唱歌的时候，月亮徘徊着从树稍走到了屋顶；我舞剑的时候，影子凌乱缤纷地变幻着。我醒着的时候我们玩得可真高兴。后来我醉了，他们也走了。 我永远亲密的朋友，美丽的月亮和我可爱的影子，你们让我忘记了世俗的一切。我多想总是与你们相逢在遥远的云端！
    January 11, 2012
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