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- 第一編の作文 私は読書が好きなあまり、書類の中からいろいろことを獲得するので。 作者は自分の思想を書類に託すと思う。私はさまざまの種類の書籍を読むのが好きだ、例えば小説から科学の書籍だ。大学時になかなか外国文学の小説を読んだと思う、私は一番好きな小説は＜戦争と平和＞と＜生命に愛し＞だ。＜戦争と平和＞って戦乱の後方の人の生活変化から戦争は人たちに災難と苦痛をかける。＜生命に愛し＞って私たちの生命にどうやって対処しと他人も動物もの生命にどうやって対処し、主人公が生存するために自分の勇気と意力を表現し。 私も科学の書籍が好きだ、その書類が私に科学の目でその世界を見て教えるので。 でもさ、今仕事後で、読書の時間がないし、チャンスがないし、そして書類があまり触らない、これは確かに残念だ。October 7, 201120
My Trip to Beijing (Fictional)
Hi! Please help me correct my spelling and grammar. =) I have never been to Beijing but I have to write about it for my assignment. ^_^
曉雨， 你好！
你最近怎么样？
上个月我去北京了。我以前去过北京。我真的很喜欢这个城市。北京是中国的首都。北京位于中国北部。我坐飞机去的北京，坐了十二多个小时。
在北京的时候我参观了故宫。故宫是很有趣的地方因为故宫里有很多漂亮的古建筑（对象？？）。
当我在中国的时候我真的很喜欢在夜市购物和吃中国蛋炒饭。不过我很不恨喜欢北京的天气， 北京的天气太热！
但我还想去南京，可是时间不够了。
在中国的时候我很放松。所以我想再次去中国！
明年我打算去南京。你去过南京吗？。你想和我一起去吗？
回头见！
心美
二零一一年 九月二十八日
This is what I'm trying to say:
Hi Xiaoyu!
How are you?
Last month I went to Beijing. I have been to Beijing before. I really like this city. Beijing is the capital of China and is located in the north of China. I flew to beijing in a plane. The journey took 12 hours.
In Beijing I visited the Forbidden City. The Forbidden City is a very interesting place with many beautiful objects (or artifacts?).
When I was in China I really liked shopping at the night market and eating Chinese fried rice. But I did not like the weather, it was too hot!
I also wanted to go to Nanjing but I did not have time.
When I was in China I was very relaxed so I want to go again.
I plan to go to Nanjing next year. Have you been to Nanjing before? Do you want to come with me?
See you soon!
Xinmei
28 September 2011
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Thank you for your help!!0 votedOctober 1, 20111
