Sorry about the previously spelling mistake:

You needed to add the 'am' in. Otherwise it was perfect! :) 

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

l am from china . l want to make some foreign friends .

 

 

You needed to add the 'and' in. Otherwise it was perfect! :) 

I do not speak Chinese, but here's some advice I use. A lot of my friends tried to surround themselves in English when they were trying to learn. This means making small cards and sticking them to everyday items. For instance, I am learning French. On my bed, I have stuck a sticker that says 'Lit' in French. I come into contact with this every time I go to use my bed, which results in me remembering the word. Other ways to expose yourself to the language is to consider visiting english websites, buying english books, and, of course, finding a teacher who will help you learn the language. English is a hard language- but stick with it. Good luck!!

I like to wear black with contrasting colours. For instance, black jeans and a royal blue top.

Blue is my favourite colour. 

my holidays

ohohoho/
Today my friend and I went to the skateing-rink. It is was nice. We went skating. At the skate-rink were our classfriends(boys). They drank alcohol and after (I think this is what you mean?)  they were very happy.I fell many of times.Tomorrow we will met at the school and will be speaking about how we went on the skate-rink.

 

I have highlighted the corrections. :)