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Personal Statement for College Admission NEED HELP!(need creative ideas and what do college want) One should always face challenges. There were many challenges and changes that I had to face. Two of them are the most difficult and significant. I was born and raised in China. I took 7 courses in junior high school. And I did extremely well in Math, Physics and Chemistry. Physics is the best and my favorite subject. I often got perfect scores and best scores in my class. I also hope that I can do a job which has involvement with Physics. I will enjoy it. In 2009, I took The High-school Entrance Examination which is the second most important exam in China. That was a big challenge for me. But I did so much practice in my junior high school so I am confident that I can go to a good high school. I did good but I am not satisfied with it. After that I went to No.2 High School in Shenyang City which is also ranked second in the whole province. However, my parents decided to move to US. So I had to drop out and left for U.S at the end of 2009. That also means I won't go to college in China. And I got a great opportunity to learn knowledge and western culture. Nevertheless, I had to overcome the most difficult challenge ever—English, before I acquire the new skills. I can still remember when I first speak to an American, I felt so nervous and didn't understand what she said because I rarely heard English in that kind of speed. So I have to get a friend to translate for me. I know the best way to learn a language is to be immersed in it. But my feeling about English is too weak to understand passages or use words correctly. So I keep listening, watching English videos, looking up words and trying to talk with other people. Now I can see my improvement apparently in my freshman year. I can understand gradually and communicate with them. I found the Math and Science were much easier than my junior high school classes. Friends and teachers called me a genius. Especially after I took both Algebra and Geometry Regents and scored double 100 on them. And in my sophomore year, I scored 100 in Chemistry Regents, 99 in Algebra 2 Regents, 77 in English Regents. In my junior year, I took English Regents again and scored 99 in English Regents. Nobody could believe this, including me. I felt I didn't waste my perspiration, it encouraged me to learn more and do the best I can. Challenge is a spring, if you are weak, it will be strong; if you are strong, it will be weak. Bruce Lee told us,"Do not pray for an easy life, pray for the strength to endure a different one."

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cool !
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That's so great. . ^_^ I also studying at university and majoring physics
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thank you : )

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