my holidays
ohohoho/
Today I and my friend went to skateing-rink.It is was nice.We are went and went on skate.On skate-rink was our classfriends(boys).They dranks alko after they were very happy.I was falled and went and after falled.Tomorrow we are met in the school and will speaking how we went on skate-rink.
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my holidays
ohohoho/
Today my friend and I went to the skateing-rink. It is was nice. We went skating. At the skate-rink were our classfriends(boys). They drank alcohol and after (I think this is what you mean?) they were very happy.I fell many of times.Tomorrow we will met at the school and will be speaking about how we went on the skate-rink.
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