Duties in the Air Force would sound the best

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My trip)

This summer I traveled to the Black Sea. We drove off from my city for seventeen hours. When Kate and I closed autobus door, we were very happy. It waited for us? (не понял...напиши по русски) The city of Odessa is a very nice town, and people have been living very well ("beautiful" - неправильно в этом контексте. лучше скакать "well") and affluently ("affable" как дружественный). The sea was not very clean, but provided much entertainment. We drank tasty wine, ate a lot of seafood and got hot under the sun! I took many photos and had pleasant impressions.)))

My trip)

This summer I traveled to the Black Sea. We drove off from my city for seventeen hours. When Kate and I closed autobus door, we were very happy. It waited for us? (не понял...напиши по русски) The city of Odessa is a very nice town, and people have been living very well ("beautiful" - неправильно в этом контексте. лучше скакать "well") and affluently ("affable" как дружественный). The sea was not very clean, but provided much entertainment. We drank tasty wine, ate a lot of seafood and got hot under the sun! I took many photos had and pleasant impressions.)))

 

молодец! я знаю английская граматтика сложно, но русская тоже))) Good job!

Is this written right?

I've tried to translate a little part of the story. Here you go:

A. P. Platonov - The Unknown Flower

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There was a little flower in the world. Nobody knew that he existed. He was growing alone in the barren land; cows and goats did not go there, and children from the Young Pioneer camp never played there. The grass wasn't growing in the barren and, there were only grey old stones that were lying there, and between them was dry dead clay. The wind was only walking in the barren land; like a sower grandad, the wind was carrying seeds along and sowing them everywhere - into the black wet ground and on the naked stone of the barren land. The black good ground was bearing flowers and grass, but in the stone, clay seeds were dying.

 

молодец, чувак. мало ошибки. может быт у тебя есть оригиналный тектс? 

Hello!

My name is xuxiaoyan. My English isn't very good. So I want to study English. I want to go abroad to study. My hobbies are drawing and reading books. I like Hanhan very much. I like his books, even though I can't always understand them. My dream is to be a painter in the future.
I will study English hard. I also hope that me and students become very good friends! Please cheer me up!

 

Not too bad! :) Remember to put spaces after periods. Also instead of "cheer me up" you should say "wish me luck". If you say "cheer me up" that can mean that you are feeling sad or something and want people to make you feel better. Keep it up!

I am the son of God as all of you are.

My name is Carvalho, but most of my friends call me Kamaka. This name was given to me by people in my neighborhood since I was a troublemaker in my childhood. Now, I'm a quiet guy. In the past, I was in martial arts and was a strike cop.
I have a wife and 2 beautiful daughters.