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I've tried to translate a little part of the story. Here you go:
A. P. Platonov - The Unknown Flower
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There was a little flower in the world. Nobody knew that he existed. He was growing alone in the barren land; cows and goats did not go there, and children from the Young Pioneer camp never played there. The grass wasn't growing in the barren and, there were only grey old stones that were lying there, and between them was dry dead clay. The wind was only walking in the barren land; like a sower grandad, the wind was carrying seeds along and sowing them everywhere - into the black wet ground and on the naked stone of the barren land. The black good ground was bearing flowers and grass, but in the stone, clay seeds were dying.
молодец, чувак. мало ошибки. может быт у тебя есть оригиналный тектс?
Has this written right?
Is this written right or Is this correct or Is this written correctly
I've tried translate a little part of the story. Here you are:
A. P. Platonov - The unknown flower
#1
There was a little flower in the world. Nobody knew that he existed exists. He was growing alone in the barren; cows and goats were not goes there, and children from Young Pioneer camp were never playing played there. The grass wasn't growing in the barren, there were only grey old stones, that were laying lying there, and between them was a dry dead clay. The wind was only blowing walking in the barren; like a sower grandad the wind was carrying seeds along and sowing them everywhere - into the black wet ground and on the naked stone barren. Into the black good ground were bearing the flowers and grass, but into a stone and a clay seeds were dying.
Hope this helps, barren means empty, but should usally be accompanied by what you are reffering to, for example: barren land, barren field, barren yard.
Very good, hope that this helps you !
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