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park is awesome several days ago ,i went to a handy park with my mom on my arrival,i found tons of people are dancing.the best vision ever! my mom went to ballroom before and i knew nothing about dancing.but the atmosphere was heated. i had to do sth;) the best day ever

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The park was awesome.

Several days ago, I went to a local park with my mom.
Upon my arrival, I saw tons of people dancing. It was quite a sight to see!
My mom had been to ballroom before, but I knew nothing about dancing. The atmosphere was heated, so i had to do something!
It was the best day ever!

 

Overall, not a bad job :)

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