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Okey,come on.I'm a good temper boy.Now practice in snda.Not graduate.I love my motherland——"China". I born in shanghai,china in 1990.Not a very diligent boy.English is not very good.just to exchange my view to people. And i'm also interested in French.In my poor view,French has artistic temparament and very romantic. In the end,i want to make some friend to many person.Hope you will like me.
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    dream(Bajin)

    I often think that dream is my only comfort.(我常常把梦当作我唯一的安慰,I often using dreaming as my only comfort) I will have a short clam just in the dream. (只有在梦里我才得到片刻的安宁,only in the dream i can have quietness)In my life, I can’t find “quiet” this word.(我的生活里找不到“宁静”这个名词。I can't find "quiet"of the word in my life) My heart is shrouded in worry and difficulty and (they) never depart from me.
    Nevertheless, when I enter into dream,and they are far away suddenly.(然而我一进到梦的世界,它们马上远远地避开了,when i enter into the dream world,and they are suddenly far away) In the dream world, I always forget myself.(在梦的世界里我每每忘了自己。) I don’t know I used to be what kind of person or I used to do something.(我不知道我过去是一个什么样的人,或者做过什么样的事。 ) I am always a simple-minded young man, in my dream, neither have past nor have future, neither worry nor difficulty.(梦中的我常常是一个头脑单纯的青年,没有过去,也没有将来;没有烦忧,也没有困难。 I am always a simple-minded young man in my dream,with no past or future,neither worry nor difficulty.) I am just now. I only have one simple way, and I only have one simple faith. (我只有一个现在,我只有一条简单的路,我只有一个单纯的信仰。I only have today,i only have a simple road,and i only have one faith)I don’t know where the faith come from and I don’t care about it in my dream. (我不知道这信仰是从什么地方来的,在梦中我也不会去考究它。)But faith is always the same faith, and in my life also don’t have change. (但信仰永远是同一的信仰,而且和我在生活里的信仰完全一样。But faith is always the same faith, andalso don’t have change in my life. )(None but)The faith takes root. I never can change or put off it.(只有这信仰是生了根的,我永远不能把它去掉或者改变。) I even forget myself and my past, but the faith sent forth rays as Venus. (甚至在梦里我忘了自己、忘了过去的时候,这信仰还像太白星那样地放射光芒。)I often open my eyes from (the)dream and lie on my bed and look around confusedly, and then I recall who I am by the faith at that time.(所以我每次从梦中睁开眼睛,躺在床上半糊涂地望着四周的景物,那时候还是靠了这信仰我才马上记起我是怎样的一个人。) The faith can link between dream world and true world.(把梦的世界和真实的世界连结起来的就只有这信仰。)(And) Even though I forget myself in my dream. I can’t do anything that I usually oppose. (所以在梦里我纵然忘了自己,我也不会做一件我平日所反对的事情)

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    July 2, 2011
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    rainbow's notebook entry: Mar 06, 2011

    what is happiness? if you have a dream that have  chance come true, (If your  dream that  have a chance to make it come true / If you have a chance that you dream can come true), you (will,主将从现) work day and night or study very hard. then you come true the dream(Then you dream come true,dream come true是短语 “梦想成真”,记住它,还有to come true达到,make/let (sth) come ture使…成真, 别再用错了). maybe(Maybe,记得首字母大写,不然一共7句话,就扣7分了) the dream is not big or  can't make it true(however it maybe not big or you can't make it come true). It's like a clothing(cloth本来就是名词) when you see it and you want to buy it,but now you have not enough money.(As you enjoy a cloth when you see it and you want to take it,but you not have enough money.)and then, you want to buy it, (与上面的话意思重复了)you must be earn many money.some day after(one day),you get the clothing(cloth).Do you feel happiness?

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    July 2, 2011
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    对写作感兴趣么?如果是为了练习写作能力,这种地方遍地都是,上学学习的语文就是锻炼写作能力和理解能力的。只要按照自己的能力报相应的学习班就行了
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    July 2, 2011
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    anyone here?come and recommend some music~

    some  pop music~

    1、believe me  -  linken park   (rock)

    2、makes me wonder  -  maroon 5  (pop)

    3、on the  floor  -  jennifer lopez

    4、one time  - justin bieber

    5、i can do it -elin lanto

    light music

    1、shoulder lean - young dro

    2、天之痕钢琴曲

    3、the sally gardens - enya

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    写的的确不错,除了些措辞问题之外,主要的意思都表达了出来,文章最后说有些想说的事情写不出来,如果有机会可以聊聊看,可以给你点建议。

     

    “年轻”的意思(“年轻”,或者 什么是“年轻”,或者  )

    大家年轻的时候往往视野狭隘,只能看到眼前的东西。(人年轻的时候往往目光短浅,只看到眼前的利益。)

    比如说,遇到一次挫折就想“哎呀,我已经不行了。我一点儿也没有价值”。 (比如说,遇到一次挫折就抱怨,“哎呀,我不行了。我活着还有什么意思")
    可是到了一定的年龄就知道人的一生什么事情都有。经过许多经验,什么都可以容纳。这就成熟了。 (可是到了一定的年龄就知道人的一生什么事情都会发生。经历过许多之后,再回过头来,发现什么事都可以坦然接受。这就成熟了。)
    那时候对年轻人说:你不要伤心。这么点儿事情没什么。 (那时候你对年轻人说:不要伤心。这么点儿挫折不算什么。)
    但是“年轻人"这个时代不喜欢听别人。特别是自己父母说的。后来又失败又遇到挫折··经过几次失败后,渐渐成熟。然后又对下一代人说··· (但是“年轻人"不喜欢听别人的劝告。特别是自己父母说的。后来经历了一次次失败和挫折··,渐渐的成熟。然后又对下一代人这样说··· )
    这样历史“重演”下去。 (就这样,故事不断的“重演”。)[历史用在这不太恰当]
    如果年轻的时候就知道一切的话多好。可是这没办法,因为人自己亲自经历以后才能真正觉悟(如果年轻的时候就明白这一切的话该多好。可是这没办法,因为只有人亲身经历以后才能真正醒悟,明白这些道理)。
    那“年轻”的好处没有吗? (那“年轻”就没有好处了吗?)
    我觉得“能”感动,感动得很激烈。我们年龄越大越不容易感动。因为那时候什么事情都知道,看到,经历过。什么都觉得不新鲜。 (我把我所理解的你的这句话如下表达出来:“我觉得越年轻就越感性,越容易感动,年龄越大就越理性,越沉稳,因为经历的多了,很多事自然就看的透了”)
    我们得到“成熟”以后忘掉感动之心吗? 这太可惜。 (我们“成熟”了以后就不会感动了吗?)
    我希望成了一个对即使小小的事情也能感动的成熟人。(我希望成了一个即使面对一件小事情也能被感动的成熟的人。)
    (想说的事情写不出来···)

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    July 2, 2011
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    第一个:A plant grows up the surface of the tree 是生长在树的表面,是长在树上的 第二个:A plant grows along the surface of the tree 是沿着树生长,就如藤蔓一样
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    June 30, 2011
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