rainbow's notebook entry: Mar 06, 2011

what is happiness? if you have a dream that have  chance come true, （If your  dream that  have a chance to make it come true / If you have a chance that you dream can come true）, you （will，主将从现） work day and night or study very hard. then you come true the dream（Then you dream come true，dream come true是短语 “梦想成真”，记住它,还有to come true达到，make/let （sth） come ture使…成真, 别再用错了）. maybe（Maybe,记得首字母大写，不然一共7句话，就扣7分了） the dream is not big or  can't make it true（however it maybe not big or you can't make it come true）. It's like a clothing(cloth本来就是名词) when you see it and you want to buy it,but now you have not enough money.（As you enjoy a cloth when you see it and you want to take it，but you not have enough money.）and then, you want to buy it, (与上面的话意思重复了)you must be earn many money.some day after（one day）,you get the clothing（cloth）.Do you feel happiness?