Search from various English teachers...
Profile
はじめまして、ヘザーです。イラストレーターです。日本語を勉強しています。ごめんなさい、日本語が下手です。書くのに長い時間がかかります。でも、がんばります！
Learning
Japanese
Language Skills
EnglishNative
Lesson Feedback
Lesson history
 Last monthLast 3 monthsAll time
Completed lessons000
Attendance rate100%100%100%
Teacher reviews
No record
Activities
  • Posted
    日本語を学ぶのは楽しい！ 日本語は今日はたくさん学びました。 私は漢字と文型をもっと勉強する必要があります。でも、日本語を学ぶのは楽しい！ 今日、私は単語を暗記したり文型を勉強したりします。日本語が不得手なので書くのに長い時間がかかります。文を書くてかなりの時間を過ごす。インターネットが好きです。私は日本語について混乱している場合は、検索で見つけるか、依頼します。インターネットのユーザー何度もあった助けてくれて。 私が助けてもらったのと同じように、英語を教えるお手伝いをしています。知識を交換が楽しみます。 I learned a lot of Japanese today. I need to study kanji and sentence structure more. However, learning Japanese is fun! Today, I memorized words and studied sentence structure. It takes a long time to write because I am not good at Japanese. I spend a lot of time writing sentences. I like the internet. If I'm confused about Japanese, I search or ask about it on the internet. Internet users have helped me many times. I help teach English in the same way I was helped. I enjoy exchanging knowledge.
    May 28, 2020
    3
    0
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    May 26, 2020
    0
  • Corrected
    My Winter Vacation in the Horn of Africa ❽

    I joined a coffee ceremony. It is said that Ethiopia is the birthplace of coffee. (There are various opinions.)
    (if you say "the coffee ceremony", it seems like I should know what coffee ceremony you mean already. Saying "a coffee ceremony" is better unless the person your talking to already knows what your talking about.)

    The few cups of coffee I drank were not bitter, so it was easy to drink. I was very relaxed there.

    Great job on this!
    0 voted
    May 26, 2020
    2
  • Corrected
    Women can do it!

    This is hard for me to understand, so for this first part I just fixed the spelling and punctuation:
    She was working out at the park, after many parents talked to her about an employee to be a coach at high school before so many people had quit that job because of children . they were trouble-maker
    .the first week was unbelievable! However,on Saturday out of blue things went downhill, many children fought against other children who belonged to the High school it was so sad that she started to weep , so the principal talked to the coach and many things fell into place , an unemployed woman was on the cards .However , parents talked to the principal and he decided not to fired her. Nowadays, she works with children heavily.

    This is my best guess as to what you where trying to say:
    She was working out in the park, afterwards, many parents talked to her about becoming a coach at a high school. This was before so many people had quit that job because of the children. They were troublemakers. The first week was unbelievable! However, on Saturday, out of the blue, things went downhill. Many children from the high school, fought against each other. It was so saddening she started to weep, so the principle talked to the coach, and due to the circumstances it looked as if she might become unemployed. However, parents talked to the principle and he decided not to fire her. Nowadays, she works with children a lot.

    Note:
    I notice you use spaces before more punctuation marks (! , .) This isn't needed and can look really weird to a native English speaker. There should only ever be one space after the punctuation marks. Just so you know!

    I hope some of this can help you!
    0 voted
    May 26, 2020
    1
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    May 26, 2020
    0
  • Corrected
    0 voted
    May 21, 2020
    0
  • Posted
    This content violates our Community Guidelines.
    May 20, 2020
    0
    1
  • Corrected
    My last holiday

    My last holiday was spent in my brother's town. It's nearby Calima lake. It was nice because I knew the lake and I was told several horror stories about it.

    I was able to camp nearby the lake and enjoy the foggy weather at night. I also visited the small town and ate the local food there.
    0 voted
    May 20, 2020
    1
  • Corrected
    A day of fasting.

    My younger sister is trying fasting to lose weight. But the rules are not too strict, it seems she can take drinks like vegetable juice. I heard from her, to stop eating foods temporarily is good for our health, because we're able to rest our organs. I thought I want to try fasting a little, but I love eating, so I'm going to try it only for a day.
    Now in Japan it is still morning, but my stomach has already been growling.
    0 voted
    May 20, 2020
    2
  • Corrected
    There is no need for an advertisement and can be considered a form of entertainment.

    People will buy a product if it of good quality or can fulfill their needs. There is no need for an advertisement and can be considered a form of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?


    Undoubtedly, advertisement’s effectiveness has increased in recent decades. As people nowadays tend to buy a product just because of its quality and their needs, regardless of advertisements for the products, some people believe that advertisements should not be needed anymore. However, I firmly disagree with this for two main reasons.
    To begin with, even though a product had a good quality and fulfills the consumer’s needs, if it was unknown to people, it would be hard to make people consume those products. Thus, advertisement is essential in order to reveal products to the consumers. For instance, statistics from Stanford University show that more than 70% of people get information of products from its advertisements first, then they try to find out more information such as quality, reviews, and so on.
    In addition, advertisements have lots of functions apart from informing about the products. For example, advertisers want to communicate with consumers about their companies and brands, other than simply informing them of the function or effect of the product, and one of the most efficient things that makes this possible is advertising through various media, so it still performs more than just entertainment.
    In conclusion, people still find out their needs and quality of products through advertisement. The most important role of advertisement is to inform people about products and a company’s brand. This eventually makes people consider buying their products.
    0 voted
    May 20, 2020
    0