A day fasting.
My younger sister is trying fasting for losing her weight. But it's not a too strict rule, it seems she can take drinks like vegetable juice. I heard from her, we stop eating foods temporarily is good for our health because we're able to rest our organs. I thought I want to try fasting a little, but I love eating, so I'm going to try it only a day.
Now, Japan is still morning, but my stomach has already been growling.
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A day fasting.
My younger sister is trying fasting to fast for losing her in order to lose weight. But it's she's not very strict about it, it seems she can take consume drinks like vegetable juice. I heard from her, She told me, if we stop eating foods temporarily it can be is good for our health because we're able to rest our organs. I thought I want to try fasting a little, but I love eating, so I'm going to try it only for a day.
Now, in Japan it is still morning, but my stomach has already been growling.
Very good! I made some changes that make it sound better, more natural to me, but was not precisely incorrect, for example my first change. Hope it helps.
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A day fasting.
My younger sister is trying fasting for losing weight. But it's not a too strict of a rule, it seems she can take drinks like vegetable juice. I heard from her, if we stop eating foods temporarily it is good for our health because we're able to rest our organs. I thought I would want to try fasting a little, but I love eating, so I'm going to try it only for a day.
Now, in Japan it is still morning, but my stomach has already been growling.
You also never start a sentence with "but".
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A day of fasting.
My younger sister is trying fasting to lose weight. But the rules are not too strict, it seems she can take drinks like vegetable juice. I heard from her, to stop eating foods temporarily is good for our health, because we're able to rest our organs. I thought I want to try fasting a little, but I love eating, so I'm going to try it only for a day.
Now in Japan it is still morning, but my stomach has already been growling.
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A day fasting.
My younger sister is trying fasting to lose weight. But it's not too strict, it seems she can drinks things like vegetable juice. She told me that not eating food temporarily is good for our health because we're able to rest our organs. I thought that I might want to try fasting a little, but I love eating, so I'm only going to try it for a day.
Now, Japan is still morning, but my stomach is already growling.
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I also wrote about Fasting as it is Ramadan the month of fasting in Islamic calendar. We started fasting since 26 days ago, three days are left.
https://www.italki.com/entry/1069283
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