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- Japan earthquake The March 11, 2011 earthquake and tsunami that occurred in northeastern Japan left nearly 20,000 people dead or missing and resulted in immeasurable losses and a radiation fallout crisis. How would you feel if you lose your loved ones? There is no doubt that people who lose their loved ones will become depressed. It is sad to know that even one year on, tsunami survivors are still experiencing the emotional impact of the disaster. There are children who scare to flush the toilet as the sound of running water reminds them of the tsunami. I hope that there will be an organization to cooperate with schools and communties to help address children’s emtional needs. This nurtual disaster doesn’t only affect children. A lot of elderly people also are affected after the quake and have emotional problems as a result. Since many of them need to live in temporary accommodation, they are experiencing loneliness and isolation. Also, I sympathize with the children who lost their parents after this terrible earthquake. The day before the earthquake they could still live with their parents happily; The day after the earthquake they can just deplore the death of their parents. I feel so lucky to live in a city where a massive earthquake won’t occur at all. As a normal high school student, not much I can do besides making donation. However, I believe that I can certainly help lots of survivors to build their devastated towns through donation.March 18, 201210
sorry, 上邊嗰篇未改完就錯手提交咗。
6月4日(星期六)上個月我買咗白色嘅iPhone4。白色iPhone4嘅售賣時間遲過預計，因爲日本有東日本大震災。 <- excellent!
我最愛就喺白色iPhone架喇! 我下載咗好多App，例如中文英文辭典，香港電台，twitter，openrice，咁就可以學廣東話。 <- good!
‧我就愛白色iPhone喇 <- 你亦都可以將「愛」改做「鍾意」。
‧至於「喇」，個人覺得前邊如果唔加個「架」，感覺上有小小怪。但如果「架」同「喇」都唔用，反而就無問題。
其實，我依家已經試緊用blog, facebook, twitter 去訓練自己廣東話嘅表達能力, 其他網頁。雖然唔容易明白香港人講嘅野，我會繼續試下架嘞！<em> </em>
‧中文嘅文法同英文唔同，你可以前一句用完「雖然」，之後下一句用「但喺」。
例如：雖然今日打波輸咗，但係我仍然會繼續努力！
‧至於嚟句「我會繼續試下架嘞」，「嘞」字前邊加個「架」字會更加好。
其實iPhone唔係平架，不過我覺得好有用。開車或者出街嘅時候，我成日蕩失路。如果帶咗智能手機，navigation嘅功能可以幫我搵路。
‧我會用「成日」代替「常常」，因為常常比較書面語，平時講嘢嘅時候多數會用「成日」。
另外iPhone嘅影相功能都唔錯，可以聽音樂或者podcast，可以睇書，咁就唔使帶影相機，iPod，書喇。
‧唔錯 = not bad
‧大部份人通常口語嘅時候都喺講「功能」
‧普遍嚟講，多數會講「相機」多過「影相機」
‧btw, 可以用「聽歌」代替「聽音樂」，不過「聽音樂」都喺啱嘅
此外白色嘅iPhone4真係可愛！有好多買嘅理由。
‧可以考慮用「靚」代替「可愛」。
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你今次篇作文喺最好嘅一次，表達得好好，有啲句子我幫你改咗，但唔代表喺你錯，只係我想改得更加好。繼續努力，加油!0 votedJune 4, 201126月4日(星期六)
上個月我買咗白色嘅iPhone4。白色iPhone4嘅售賣時期遲過預計，因爲日本有東日本大震災。 <- excellent!
我最愛就喺白色iPhone架喇! 我下載咗好多App，例如中文英文辭典，香港電台，twitter，openrice，咁就可以學廣東話。 <- good!
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其實，我依家已經試緊用blog, facebook, twitter 去訓練自己廣東話嘅表達能力, 其他網頁。雖然唔容易明白香港人講嘅野，我會繼續試下嘞！
其實iPhone唔係平架。不過我覺得好有用。開車或者出街嘅時候，我成日蕩失路。如果帶智能手機，navigation嘅機能幫我搵道。
‧我會用「成日」代替「常常」，因為常常比較書面語，平時講嘢嘅時候多數會用「成日」。
例如，"I quite often go to "
另外iPhone嘅影相功能都唔錯，可以聽音樂或者podcast，可以睇書，咁就唔使帶影相機，iPod，書喇。
此外白色嘅iPhone4真係可愛！有好多理由買吖。0 votedJune 4, 201105月28日(星期六)
梅雨季節嚟到。新聞報道話今年嘅梅雨季節好早嚟到多過平年。
梅雨季節嚟到，新聞報道話今年嘅梅雨季節早過往年。
於日本由大概五月到七月，成日落雨。
大槪五月到七月左右日本都會成日落雨。
有啲人覺得雨天喺少少悶，不過我哋可以玩喺屋企。
有啲人覺得雨天有少少悶，不過我哋都可以喺屋企玩。
對我，睇書，瑜伽，煮飯，彈鋼琴，睇波，手工藝，真係有意思。
而我自己就會睇書、做瑜伽、彈鋼琴、睇波同玩手工藝，真係好有意思。
而且，聽樂於嘅音有趣。
而且落雨嘅聲好得意！
其實我聽日有予定去行山。
其實我聽日有預計過去行山。
如果好多落雨，我會留喺屋企睇書。
但如果落好大雨，我都會留喺屋企睇書。
如果落雨，大家鍾意做乜嘢呀？ <- ok
感想：
我試下打中文,如果妳唔明嘅話,我先打英文 :)
妳廣東話嘅表達能力真係愈嚟愈好，錯嗰啲都係小問題。不過有樣嘢想提一提你，我覺得妳有時用咗英文或日文個思維去諗中文（我聽我朋友講過，佢話日本同英文嘅文法差唔多，其實喺唔喺？），咁所以啲句子會怪怪地，例如「對我，睇書，瑜伽......」嚟一句，我諗你寫「對我」嘅原因喺諗起類似英文嘅「For me」。另外一個例子就喺「我哋可以玩喺屋企」，英文喺最後先寫地方，但中文多數寫咗地方先，之後先講做啲咩事，所以我就改咗成「我哋可以喺屋企玩」。我是但舉多個例子，例如英文嘅「We swam in the chily water.」，廣東話多數就會講「我哋喺好冷嘅水上邊游水」，而較少講「我哋游水喺好冷嘅水上邊。」
另外，其實你可以試下用多啲助語詞 (Auxiliary verb) ，因為講廣東話嘅人成日都會用到，有時如果無助語時感覺就會怪左啲。如果我將少少助語詞加到你其中兩句句子度，就會變得以下咁樣：1. 梅雨季節嚟到喇，新聞報道話今年嘅梅雨季節早過往年。
2. 而我自己就會睇書、做瑜伽、彈鋼琴、睇波同玩手工藝，真係好有意思架！
用咗助語詞比人感覺會生動啲，較容易表達到自己嘅情感，但當然都唔好句句都用喇。
加油!! 繼續努力!! :)0 votedMay 28, 20116
