Some ideas about language learning The development of electronic information technology allows us to obtain any information we need anytime, anywhere. This seems to be very convenient but I don‘t think this is the final form of the learning revolution. Essentially, language is the basis of information transmission. The invention of words has made human information transmission break through the direct transmission of spoken language, so that information can be stored in the text, beyond the direct space-time boundaries, and spread for a long time. Therefore, mankind has the opportunity to enter the era of information technology. Finally promoted the development of economic globalization and information technology. Our online language learning model is still based on information technology as a two-way communication. It is essentially the same as sitting in a classroom and learning with a teacher. What I want to say is that no matter how advanced information technology is, this mode of forced input and output will not change. For a very self-disciplined person, they can use resources effectively. Humans are emotional animals, and advanced technology makes people dependent on it, becoming lazy and not even thinking. This is why I think that information technology is not the final form of the learning revolution, but it can exist in a form of assisted learning.

Can you make my expression more natural? There are more people concerned about the status of women in society, this reflects the progress of society to a certain extent. Women are supposed to have more opportunities and power to participate in more diverse social fields. In western countries, people's pursuit of gender equality is more open and free. Many successful women are willing to stand up and speak out for women's power and status. These women may be a female politician, or a very popular singer, they use their influence to help women gain more attention and resources. But it is undeniable that the words of society are still in the hands of men. In Asian countries, I don't think the discussion of women's status is as deep as the West. Asian culture is conservative and has relatively weak status for women. However, I think it’s very special in China, female status can be divided into family status and social status here. Generally speaking, women ’s family status is higher than their social status. In the Chinese family, Women have more discretion, even if the social status of men is much higher than that of women. If you are not married at 28 years old, you will be regarded as a FAILED girl, but no one cares if your career is successful. So when I decided to study in Japan this year, I was opposed by everyone around me. The only reason is that I am a 27 years old unmarried girl, I should not put time and energy on my dreams. Obviously this concept is outdated, every girl has the power to decide her own future instead of putting hope on others. I believe there will be more successful women in the future, proving that women also have many possibilities. What is the status of women in your country? Can you tell me your story?

female status(can you help me to correct the essay and tell me your story？) There are more people concerned about the status of women in society, this reflects the progress of society to a certain extent. Women are supposed to have more opportunities and power to participate in more diverse social fields. In western countries, people's pursuit of gender equality is more open and free. Many successful women are willing to stand up and speak out for women's power and status. These women may be a female politician, or a very popular singer, they use their influence to help women gain more attention and resources. But it is undeniable that the words of society are still in the hands of men. In Asian countries, I don't think the discussion of women's status is as deep as the West. Asian culture is conservative and has relatively weak status for women. However, I think it’s very special in China, female status can be divided into family status and social status here. Generally speaking, women ’s family status is higher than their social status. In the Chinese family, Women have more discretion, even if the social status of men is much higher than that of women. If you are not married at 28 years old, you will be regarded as a FAILED girl, but no one cares if your career is successful. So when I decided to study in Japan this year, I was opposed by everyone around me. The only reason is that I am a 27 years old unmarried girl, I should not put time and energy on my dreams. Obviously this concept is outdated, every girl has the power to decide her own future instead of putting hope on others. I believe there will be more successful women in the future, proving that women also have many possibilities. What is the status of women in your country? Can you tell me your story?

can you help me to correct this eassy？ There were a lot of shocking news about depression last year. Many celebrities have committed suicide because of depression. It contained Korean female star Shirley. Depression is a neglected mental illness, its severity is often underestimated. According to reports, more than one hundred million people in China suffer from different degrees of depression. What an amazing number! Unfortunately, less than 10 percent of people with depression are diagnosed and treated effectively in China. I don’t know what this number is in other countries.I think behind this reflects certain social problems. Chinese young people are under great pressure. Stress comes from their job, finance ,marriage and so on. Everyone tries their best to survive.They live in a tense atmosphere even have no time to settle down and read a book or listen to a song. China is still a developing country which made a great progress economically, it still have a lot of work to do. China was an imperial state until the end of Qing dynasty, ancient Chinese traditional thought and culture had a great influence on modern China. China needs time to change some of its old concepts and establish and improve a new social system. Whatever,I believe everything will go in a good direction.