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- I do agree that plastic is really bad for the environment, but before I get to this conclusion, I decided to do research to actually find out why it is that bad. Thus, I read some reports which took up the topic of plastic problems to lean the fact. According to the report made in 2019, the production and incineration of plastic materials created over 850 million tons of carbon dioxide and so other greenhouse gases and if people keep using plastic products as they usually do on their daily basis, by 2100 it can emit 260 billion tons of gases.As you should know, a large amount of CO2 can speed up climate change which can cause climate change-related problems to earth, such as, crazy weather, problems on growing food, and etc.In conclusion, plastic garbages has been causing problems that polluted the ocean and killed many sea creatures and this is very worrying. But the point is that these products are really cheap and easy to use and most of them can be replaced by other kinds of materials like paper straws and eco-bags, for example, but not all the companies manufacture it because these products can cost lots of money and actually it does not seem to be a profit to them at all and they can't change it over the night. Also, I think that it will take time for the people to get acculturated to using less bad plastic and using the new model like the paper straws I mentioned above, however, I do support this change in order to save the earth and to pave our future.*** I made it fast and easy to read, however, I made a few adjustments to sound more formal and also to sound more like a native. Hope it helps. ***0 votedJuly 14, 20201
- Dear brother,I would like to give you an update about an interesting activity I managed to do, Space Tourism! believe you or not, but this is where I am right now. My business partner also came and we are having such a good time. To be honest, being up here far from the earth, looking into space is so much better and relaxing than sitting in a classroom where I get always stressed or bored. Nevertheless, I think we got a great opportunity for profit emerges by promoting tourism. I'll keep you posted. Stay tuned.*** Hey man, what's up? You made it very well but I've corrected some mistakes you made like adding too much "and" to connect the ideas and also some words to seem more like a native. Anyways, this is what I would write it. Hope it helps ***0 votedJuly 14, 20201
- <em>The actual customer retention rate is dropping, as I alluded-to three months ago the lacking of communication with our clients through the States of the Financial Statement of the first quarter is not as good as it should. Thus, as long as we raise the communicating frequencies with our customers, the situation will be relieved and our annual report will show better results.</em><em>Hope it helps!</em><em>Regards.</em>0 votedMay 1, 20200

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