Tuesday, 5 May 2020
Good day!
Today was a very busy. I studied.
The training was done, too.
The rain with thunderstorm was in the evening.
I very tired be in isolation despite busy day.
Waiting for summer...
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Tuesday, 5 May 2020
Good day!
Today was a very busy. I studied.
The training was done, too.
The rain and thunderstorm was in the evening.
I am very tired being in isolation despite** a quiet day. (proper use)
... waiting for Summer ...*
or, summer
**Careful with this conjunction. You point in the opposite direction. Here is another proper use: I am poor on this island despite having eighty million pounds"***. (it makes a contrast not a similarity). "Despite" is the unexpected.
***The island is a desert island.
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Good day!
Today was a very busy day, I studied and trained a lot.
In the evening, the rain with thunderstorm outside was remarkable.
I am very tired to be in isolation despite the busy days I am having.
I can't wait for the Summer.
Just a simple correction. Hope it helps.
Regards.
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