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This is Marian Gavilán from Spain. I´d like to improve my english helping to improve spanish as well.
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- Compalint letter Dear Mr. X, I feel compelled to write to you in order to describe my concern about my district, and to make some suggestions. Firstly, we were promised during your election as mayor that suburb where I live will be a flourishing and affluent neighbourhood, I cannot help but point out that not only it is more unsafe and insecure, involving an increase of crime rate but also it is more and more packed and congested now than before. Secondly, while you are boosting economy in wealthy districts by ongoing heavy investment and pour money into local businesses in other neighbourhoods, my district seems to be embarking on a deeply economic downturn. We cannot overlook the fact that it is likely that only drugdealing and criminal businesses are sprawling and you tend to, as the saying goes, turn a blind eye to this chaotic situation. As citizens I feel I was lied to and used in order to get votes. I am writing to ask you to please keep your promise. The way forward is coming up with a deeply plan to encourage new investment to our district and redevelope areas affected by crimes. You must tackle this issue without delay if not this will be far-reaching effects. When it comes down to our city, politicians are compelled to do their best. It´s crystal clear to me that were I in your shoes I would be take action asap in order to avoid future riots. It is high time broadened horizons. I look forward to hearing from you shortly. Yours sincerely, Marian GAugust 19, 202030
- Un diario.¡Cuando tiempo sin escribir en el diario! En los últimos días, tuvieron lugar muchas cosas. Antes de regresar a la universidad. <s>Mi tía invitó a mi casa</s> (en esta frase se entiende que tu tia invitó a tu casa, imagino que "tu tía fue invitada a tu casa" o que "tu tia te invito a su casa"). Por eso, mis padres se <s>tomieron</s> tomaron dos días libres para <s>jugar</s> estar con mi tía. Visitaron muchas atracciones de Chang<s> de</s>. Pasamos dos días muy <s>feliz</s> felices. Luego, recibí <s>la</s> información de la universidad. Todos los estudiantes <s>hay</s> teniamos que regresar a la universidad. Además de las circunstancias especiales. <s>Me dispuesto a</s> Preparé <s>todos</s> <s>los</s> todas las cosas que necesito. Fue el veinticuatro de mayo cuando <s>regresó</s> regresé a la universidad. Cuando<s> llegó </s> llegué a la puerta de la universidad, <s>tenía</s> había mucha gente. Todos los estudiantes tenían que tomarse la temperatura con termómetro infrarrojo. <s>Por eso está caliente</s> (esta frase no se entiende, podría ser que con las prisas estabas acalorada), mi temperatura se mostró alta. El profesor me hizo que <s>descansaba</s> descansara un rato para bajar la temperatura. Al final <s>llegó</s> llegué al dormitorio, y <s>comenzaba</s> <s>comencé</s> a arreglar a mis cosas. <s>¡Que día muy cansada! </s> (tienes dos opciones " ique día tan cansado! o iEse día acabé muy cansada!.0 votedMay 30, 20201
- Cause and effects essay about demonstrations to support the fight for women's rights Nowadays, women and man are supposed to be equal as for rights. Yet, I cannot help but point out that not all that glitters is gold and women are struggling to deal with not only glass cealing and sticky ground but also genre violence and sexist. At first glance, one of the major tools to sort out the inequality appears to be demonstrations. Let us go in depth in this issue. If we come across woman rights demonstration, we realise that they are tend to be a pacific and colouring protest and it goes without saying that these demonstrations steer clear of violence . When we trace the origin of women right demonstrations we would find that due to women physical disadvantage women came up with other way to make their voice heard. The suffrage movement was set up in 1860, formed by high-class women whom the use of violence would bring along far-reaching effects, it is needless to say that this is the reason for these women prefered a calm way as demostrations to defend their rights. Let us dive deeper into it and pin down the effects of these demonstration. When it comes down to reclaim gender equality and end gender bias, we can´t turn a blind eye to demonstrations have been turned out the most effective way to achieve sorority women. First suffrage demonstration took our fight up a notch and 8 March demonstration join us and make us stronger. We cannot overlook the fact that women rights demonstrations are the tip of the iceberg and women right movement is rooted in our society to establish. Demonstrations drew a line in the past and their effects will be remain for long time.May 6, 202020
- Escribo <s>espanol </s>españolMe llamo Patrycja. Tengo 43 <s>anos</s> años. Vivo en Varsovia, pero yo soy de la ciudad de Biała Podlaska<s> ciudad</s>. Mi familia está formada por:<s> esto es</s> mi marido Jacek, mi hijo Tymek y mi hija Hania. En <s>nosotra</s> nuestra casa tenemos 4 cuartos y el <s>salon </s>salón. En la cocina tengo un <s>frigorifico</s> frigorífico blanco, una mesa gris y 4 sillas. No tenemos perros <s>y</s> ni gatos. Mi color favorito es el azul. Mi coche es azul. Me encanta leer mucho, ver <s>peliculas</s> películas y aprender español <s>y</s> e (si la palabra que va después de la "y" empieza por "i" o "hi" se utiliza la "e" en vez de la y)<s> ingles</s> inglés. Hablo 4 idiomas: polaco, <s>ingles</s> inglés, <s>y</s> un poco de <s>espanol</s> español y <s>frances</s> francés. Yo soy periodista, trabajo en "GW".Buena redacción pero debes fijarte más si las palabras llevan tilde y sobretodo utiliza la ñ, cambia el significado totalmente de la palabra, por ejemplo: anos significa "assholes":).0 votedApril 26, 20201
- Algunas palabras sobre el último libro que escuchéTengo una hija pequeña de dos años y siete meses. Es muy enérgica y como vivimos en una casa que tiene jardín decidí escuchar un libro en lugar de leerlo. Así podré estar más atenta a ella cuando estemos afuera. El libro que elegí para escuchar se llama: “Mis últimos 10 minutos y 38 segundos en este extraño mundo” por Elif Shafak. El título me pareció peculiar. Y de esta autora leí otros libros y me gustaron.Este libro habla sobre la vida de una prostituta que es asesinada y mientras está en un cubo de basura, en los últimos 10 minutos y 38 segundos de conciencia que le queda, recuerda anécdotas representativas de su vida. Su nacimiento, su vida junto a una familia que no la ama y no la cree cuando les cuenta que alguien de su familia no la trató bien, su huida <s>à</s> a Estanbul en busca de una vida mejor pero que resulta no ser tan buena como ella <s>lo</s> deseaba. A lo largo de su vida hará cinco amigos <s>de los más</s> raros pero fieles hasta el final y los cuales de una manera inesperada le darán la tranquilidad que tanto anhelaba.La vida de Leyla será un motivo para hablar sobre muchas otras cosas. Ser inmigrante, transexual o prostituta es inaccesible en un mundo demasiado religioso y estricto. Pero de alguna manera los 6 juntos logran sobrevivir y se hacen más fuertes.El tema de la muerte es también tratada en este libro. La autora lo hace de manera magistral. Una vez que el cuerpo deja de funcionar no significa que todo acabó. Por el contrario, es cuando en realidad empiezan a pasar cosas y pueden cambiar vidas.Reconozco que el principio estuve a punto de renunciar a escuchar el libro. Por mi rigidez en el pensamiento. Hago lo que hace la mayoría de las personas: cerrar los ojos ante las historias de las mujeres que ejercitan el <s>más viejo</s> trabajo más viejo del mundo.Me alegro que <s>continúe</s> continuara leyendo. Se me abrieron los ojos y también aprendí un poco más acerca de otros mundos. Por <s>lo</s> raro que me parezca, mi sociedad y mis creencias no son los únicos <s>verdades</s> verdaderos (o válidos) en este mundo.Una redacción prácticamente perfecta. iMuy bien hecho!0 votedApril 26, 20200
- Es el tiempo de cuidar el jardín!Intento ver la cuarentena como una oportunidad de dedicar mi tiempo <s>a</s> en algo que no consigue obtener mi atención en el normal curso del tiempo. Al ver algunos videos minimalistas en Youtube he notado que es muy frecuente en la comunidad decorar su <s>propria</s> propia casa con plantas de muchas formas y colores. Aunque yo no me considere para nada una persona minimalista me han llamado la atención muchas ideas de esta filosofía de vida y entre ellas el uso de las plantas como ornamento.Mi mamá tenía en el jardín algunas plantas y flores a las cuales nadie dedicaba mucha atención ni cuidado y decidí <s>tomar el</s> hacerme cargo desde los primeros días de <s>lockdown</s> confinamiento/cuarentena. Entre ellas había algunas casi muertas y otras <s>en</s> con buena salud. Con la intención de hacerlas revivir regué mucho<s>s</s> todos los ejemplares de mi jardín y ahora... la situación es al revés: casi todas las plantas que estaban medio muertas ya <s>tienen</s> disfrutan de plena salud mientras que las que no <s>eran</s> estaban secas ahora se han muerto.Creo que no tengo el pulgar verde! (o no tengo buena mano para las plantas)iBuen trabajo Annita!, sí que tienes buena mano para el Español :)0 votedApril 21, 20201
- <s>El páis </s>Japón considera <s> para</s> que puedan estudiar en la escuela los niños extranjeros.En Japón<s>, </s>es obligatorio que los niños vayan a <s>los niños en</s> la escuela<s> cuando</s> desde la edad de 6 <s>años</s> a 14 años.Según el Ministerio de Educación y Ciencia<s>,</s> el año pasado había unos 124.000 niños extranjeros de esta edad <s>el año pasado</s>. (queda más natural poner la fecha al principio)Sin embargo, unos 20.000 de ellos no habráin asistido a la escuela <s>habían estudiado</s>, o no estarían seguros de que asistieron a la escuela.Por lo tanto, el día 16, los expertos del Ministerio de Educación y Ciencia intercambiaron y resumieron los consejos para que todos los niños extranjeros puedan estudiar en la escuela.Ellos piensan que es importante hacer <s>el</s> un listado con el nombre, dirección etc., de los niños extranjeros con la edad como los japoneses.Y habrá que visitar cada casa de los niños para investigar <s>fuertemente</s> en profundidad que ellos <s>estudian en </s>asisten a (o simplemete "van a la escuela") la escuela.En abril, el Ministerio de Educación y Ciencia tendrá<s> la</s> una reunión para intercambiar <s>la</s> ideas de como podrán ir a la escuela, y luego <s>va a informarse</s> se informará a cada prefectura o pueblo.Buena e interesante redacción Mirinda. iÁnimo!0 votedApril 18, 20201
- Lo que he hecho hoyHoy me desperté a las nueve. Hice mi lección de audio en español, se llama Pimsleur. Luego hice ejercicio (si te refieres a ejercicio físico queda raro decir que hiciste tu ejercicio, mejor hice ejercicio). Terminé muy cansado. Después tomé el desayuno (también puedes decir: "Después desayuné", queda mas natural). Comí un bocadillo de huevo y tocino. Tambien tomé plátano y uvas. Luego jugué a un videojuego. Jugué a Apex Legends con mis amigos.Muy bien!0 votedApril 13, 20200
- ¡Películas! La NieblaLa Niebla es una película de 2007 que nos cuenta la historia de un hombre que se queda aislado con un grupo de personas en un mercado después de que una niebla misteriosa cayera sobre la pequeña ciudad en la que vive. En el comienzo (Al principio mejor), no saben lo que se esconde en la niebla, pero saben que todos los que entran en ella mueren (escuchan gritos). Después, por la noche, descubren que hay todo tipo de monstruos viviendo en la niebla sólo esperando que salgan para matarlos y comerlos. En mi opinión, la cosa más interesante de la película es enseñarnos esa pequeña sociedad y como ellos van a organizarse y a reaccionar (spoiler alert: la cosas van tan mal como podéis imaginar) . La película también nos enseña nuestra tendencia a olvidar la razón cuando estamos delante de una situación extrema. Nuestro instinto es hacer elecciones basadas en creencias y emociones. El fin de la película es muy polémico. Hay mucha gente que lo ama, pero hay una cantidad igual de gente que lo odia. A mí no me gustó mucho, pero tampoco es el peor final de todas las películas. Creo que el mensaje final es que no podemos creer ciegamente en cualquier cosa, pero tenemos que tener esperanza para vencer los momentos difíciles de la vida.Muy buena redacción!0 votedApril 13, 20201
- Essay over segregation Gender equality is supposed to be warratied by the most of charters. Yet, I cannot help but point out that not all that glitters is gold and we come across that men and women are segregated by several ways. At first glance, it appears to be that women have same chances of men, we are prone to forgetting that women go through work discrimination, not only are women rarely selected by boss to be mentored but also relegate to low-paid works. And that is where we have to draw the line, it is high time we brought segregation to an end. It is fair to highlight that the end of segregation is not pin down the end of gender inequality. Nevertheless, it is needless to say that a long-term segregation have far-reaching effects as for gender bias. Let us get straight to the point and tackle into the heart of the matter. Had we approached religious traditions as the root of segregation, we would have avoided years of discrimation when it comes down to gender. You might wonder what the way forward is. Well, we must come up with a roadmap in order to achieve that religion alongs with gender equality go hand in hand together. As that saying goes, we must to grab the bull by the horns because the most of Religions have been turning a blind eye to gender equality and it is worth changing it. Last but not least, we cannot overlook the fact that female athletics are being paid less than their male mates. Facts speak for themself, acording a recent research, be a female athletic brings along earning 50% less than if you were a male. It is the utmost importance that we steer clear of segregation and make women voices heard.April 10, 202072

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