Essay over segregation
Gender equality is supposed to be warratied by the most of charters. Yet, I cannot help but point out that not all that glitters is gold and we come across that men and women are segregated by several ways.
At first glance, it appears to be that women have same chances of men, we are prone to forgetting that women go through work discrimination, not only are women rarely selected by boss to be mentored but also relegate to low-paid works. And that is where we have to draw the line, it is high time we brought segregation to an end.
It is fair to highlight that the end of segregation is not pin down the end of gender inequality. Nevertheless, it is needless to say that a long-term segregation have far-reaching effects as for gender bias.
Let us get straight to the point and tackle into the heart of the matter. Had we approached religious traditions as the root of segregation, we would have avoided years of discrimation when it comes down to gender. You might wonder what the way forward is. Well, we must come up with a roadmap in order to achieve that religion alongs with gender equality go hand in hand together. As that saying goes, we must to grab the bull by the horns because the most of Religions have been turning a blind eye to gender equality and it is worth changing it.
Last but not least, we cannot overlook the fact that female athletics are being paid less than their male mates. Facts speak for themself, acording a recent research, be a female athletic brings along earning 50% less than if you were a male.
It is the utmost importance that we steer clear of segregation and make women voices heard.
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Essay over about segregation
Gender equality is supposed to be warratied guaranteed by the most of charters constitutions. Yet, I cannot help but point out that not all that glitters is gold and we come across find that men and women are segregated by in several ways.
At first glance, it appears to be that women have the same chances (or "opportunities") of as men, however we are prone tend to forgetting that women go through are subject to work discrimination; not only are women rarely selected by bosses to be mentored, but also relegated to low-paid works. And that is where we have to draw the line, it is high time we brought segregation to an end.
It is fair to highlight that the end of segregation is will not pin down mean the end of gender inequality. Nevertheless, it is needless to say that a long-term segregation has far-reaching effects as for on gender bias.
Let us get straight to the point and tackle into the heart of the matter. Had we approached religious traditions as the root of segregation, we could (podría) have avoided years of discrimation when it comes down to gender. You might wonder what the way forward is. Well, we must come up with a roadmap in order to achieve ensure that religion alongs with and gender equality go hand in hand together. As the saying goes, we must to grab the bull by the horns, because the most of religions have been turning a blind eye to gender equality and it is worth changing it that.
Last but not least, we cannot overlook the fact that female athletes are being paid less than their male mates counterparts. The facts speak for themselves: according a recent study research, be a female athlete brings along earns on average 50% less than if you were a male.
It is of the utmost importance that we steer clear of segregation and make women's voices heard.
Hola Mariam, muy bien. Por favor, no te preocupes por los errores - podemos aprender de ellos. Hay cosas que decimos en una forma muy diferente y eso requiere mucha práctica. Por el otro lado, estoy impresionado por el uso de expresiones aquí. "Grab the bull by the horns" - ¡jaja, muy bien!
Over - encima. Sobre - about.
Quizás en vez de segregation, diría discrimination. Segregation suena más como el apartheid de Sudáfrica.
Work - el trabajo en general, no es contable.
"long-term segregation" no es contable, tampoco, así que no se necesita el artículo, "a".
"religion alongs with and gender equality go hand in hand together." Estas dos partes son redundantes.
La mayoría de - "the majority of," o, "most"
Research no es contable, y si quieres hablar de una investigación en concreto, tiene que ser "a study".
Bueno, espero que eso te ayude y que estés bien con la cuarentena.
Saludos desde Córdoba. Simón.
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Essay over segregation
Gender equality is supposed to be guarantied by most of the charters. Yet, I cannot help but point out that not all that glitters is gold and we see that men and women are segregated in several ways.
At first glance, it appears to be that women have the same chances as men. But we are prone to forgetting that women experience work discrimination. Not only are women rarely selected by their boss to be mentored but also are relegated to low-paid jobs. And that is where we have to draw the line, it is high time we brought segregation to an end.
It is fair to highlight that the end of segregation is not a pin at the end [meaning?] of gender inequality. Nevertheless, it is needless to say that a long-term segregation has far-reaching effects as for gender bias.
Let us get straight to the point and tackle into the heart of the matter. Had we approached religious traditions as the root of segregation, we would have avoided years of discrimation when it comes down to gender. You might wonder what the way forward is. Well, we must come up with a roadmap in order to achieve that religion along with gender equality go hand in hand together [I can't get the meaning of the phrase]. As that saying goes, we must grab the bull by the horns because the most of religions have been turning a blind eye to gender equality and it is worth changing it.
Last but not least, we cannot overlook the fact that female athletics are being paid less than their male mates. Facts speak for themselves. According to a recent research, a female athlete on average earns 50% less than a male one.
It is the utmost importance that we steer clear of segregation and make women voices heard.
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Essay over segregation
Gender equality is supposed to be warrantied (guaranteed, suena mejor) by the most of charters. Yet, I cannot help but point out that not all that glitters is gold and we have experienced that men and women are segregated in several ways.
At first glance, it appears to be that women have the same chances as men, we are prone to forgetting that women go through work discrimination, not only are women rarely selected by their boss to be mentored but also relegated to lower paid positions. And that is where we have to draw the line, it is high time we brought segregation to an end.
It is fair to highlight that the end of segregation is not pin down the end of gender inequality. Nevertheless, it is needless to say that a long-term segregation have far-reaching effects as for gender bias.
Let us get straight to the point and tackle into the heart of the matter. Had we approached religious traditions as the root of segregation, we would have avoided years of discrimation when it comes down to gender. You might wonder what the way forward is. Well, we must come up with a roadmap in order to achieve that religion along with gender equality go hand in hand together. As that saying goes, we must to grab the bull by the horns because the most of Religions have been turning a blind eye to gender equality and it is worth changing it.
Last but not least, we cannot overlook the fact that female athletics are being paid less than their male mates. Facts speak for themself, acording a recent research, be a female athletic brings along earning 50% less than if you were a male.
It is the utmost importance that we steer clear of segregation and make women voices heard.
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