The city where I lived? (Am I correct?)
The city where I live
Tainan, the city where I was born and raised.
It is famous for its delicious food, night markets and historical sites, which are attracting many visitors from around the world.S<s>o that is has another name called ancient capital. </s> <em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Also known as an ancient capital.</em>
<s>Despite so many advantages, it has a share of problems, such as air pollution or traffic violations. </s>
<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">Though these are positive aspects, there are also negatives ones. For example air pollution and traffic violations.</em>
<s>Below I will propose my suggestions in hope of dealing with these problems.</s>
<s> First of all, Tainan has many industrial areas illegally setting out lots of exhaust emissions.</s>
There some illegal production factories, those pollute the air.
<s>The government should keep tabs on it and make some laws to keep them from generating the exhaust emissions. </s>
Responsable for the issue have to manage it and keep the control over the industries.
<s>Thus, our sky will be brighter, our body will be healthier, our environment will be cleaner.</s>
<s> Except for this problems, the traffic violation is also a important thing to concentrate on. </s>
<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">I think that traffic violations is also an important issue to focus on.</em>
<s>When we are riding, we need to wear safety helmets, follow the traffic signs and slow the speed.</s>
Besides, the local authorities should enforce traffic regulations to protect the citizens from traffic accidents and dangerous driving.
<s>To sum up, as long as we improve these problems, Tainan will be a good place to live.</s>
<em style="color: rgb(230, 0, 0);">In order to make Tainan a better place to live , we have to solve those problems.</em>