300 - Discussing some topics related to work
We must be aware that everything we do online is permanent. This is a problem when we had done something we regretted about it, especially on our social networks. This is why, before an important interview, checking and cleaning social networks is highly recommended. This is crucial if the job interview is for a big company, although I don't consider it it as a good choice to start working. In a small company, it's easier to find a calm workplace, where one can grow his or her skills and prepare himself or herself for a brighter future. Also, an internship might be a good solution for learning and get used to the general working rules, but I personally do not recommend it, especially if it is unpaid. Here in Italy, in every working contract a trial time is mandatory, so one can learn and evaluate the job during this amount of time, which is paid and often more than an internship.
In conclusion, starting in a small company, with a regular working contract, is the best solution for someone who has never worked before in his or her life.
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300 - Discussing some topics related to work
We must be aware that everything we do online is permanent. This is a problem when we had have done something we regretted about it, regret, especially on our social networks. This is why, before an important interview, checking and cleaning social networks is highly recommended. This is crucial if the job interview is for a big company, although I don't consider it it as a good choice to start working.
In a small company, it's easier to find a calm workplace where one you can grow his or her your skills and prepare himself or herself yourself for a brighter future. Also, an internship might be a good solution for learning and getting used to the general working rules. but However, I personally do not recommend it, especially if it is unpaid. Here in Italy, in every working contract a trial time is mandatory. so One can learn and evaluate the job during this amount of time, which is paid and often more useful/effective than an internship.
In conclusion, starting in at a small company, with a regular working contract, is the best solution for someone who has never worked before in his or her life.
I changed "his or her" to "your" and "himself or "herself" to "yourself. Your sentence is grammatically correct, but it's a bit awkward. Some writers use "their" even though it is not grammatically correct, but they do it to avoid the awkwardness of repeatedly saying "him or her." Even native English speakers struggle with how to write gender-neutral pronouns.
Here's an article about this topic that you may find helpful: http://www.kentlaw.edu/academics/lrw/grinker/LwtaGender_Neutral_Language.htm
I changed "get" to "getting" because two verbs separated by "and" should be the same tense: learning and getting, earn and get, buy and save, buying and saving, etc.
You write very well. One suggestion I have is to be careful about making your sentences too long. For example, in your second paragraph, I rewrote your sentences to make them a bit shorter and more readable. In general though, your sentences are grammatically correct, which is not an easy skill to master.
Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections.
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Thank you!
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I like it, I dont see any mistake
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