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Daylight of the evening
Unknowingly, I have <strike>fell</strike>
fallen in love with piano music<strike>,</strike>
. It doesn
't mean
that <strike>im</strike>
I'm interested in playing piano, but (
However) I really love to listen to it, especially <strike>when</strike> before going to sleep. I have searched
for a lot of piano music from
the internet, and I love this one best, "Daylight of the evening" by Kevin Lam<strike>,</strike>
. I also love Zhang Yiyi's music, and <strike>much</strike>
many other
s. :)
I don
't know what piano music wants to express because it has no lyrics, but at least it let
s (
helps) me feel comfortable and relaxed in some cases.
Sometimes when you are tired of some things in daily life, <strike>the</strike> relax
ing music
can act as <strike>is</strike> a good friend indeed. :)
Overall it is very good and entertaining to read! However, I would write it as:
Unknowingly, I have fallen in love with piano music. This does not mean that I am interested in playing piano anytime soon. However, I really do love to listen to it, especially before going to sleep. I have searched for a lot of piano music online and I love this one most: "Daylight of the Evening". It's by Kevin Lam. I also love music by Zhang Yiyi and so many others!
I don't know what piano music tries to express to me because there are no lyrics; but at least it helps me to feel comfortable and relaxed in some cases. Piano music is like a good friend, relaxing you when you're tired of all the things you have to do in daily life.
