Thoughts in Chinese
我今天学习过很多韩国语和汉语。我要改善可是我不懂语法很好。我喜欢学习。学习是很好玩。可是这是很困难。
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Thoughts in Chinese
我今天学习了很多韩语和汉语。我想改善可是我的语法不是很好。我喜欢学习。学习是件很好玩的事情。可是这很困难。0
Thoughts in Chinese
我今天学习过很多韩国语和汉语。我要改善可是我不懂语法很好。我喜欢学习。学习是很好玩。可是这是很困难。我今天学了很多的韩语和汉语。我想改善，可是我的语法不是很好。我喜欢学习，学习很有趣，但是这很困难。
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Leon‘s tips:
Words underlined should be deleted or substituted. (Comments in brackets) are not context but some notice. All my amendments are in black bold. It is my honor to help.
Thoughts in Chinese
I am glad your Chinese is really good, but you’d better pay more attention on your punctuations. The usage of punctuations in Chinese and in English is a little bit different. You have to use a period at the end of each full sentence in English (I mean the sentence is already full of subject and verb and object in grammar), but in Chinese we will never use periods that frequently. We only use a period at the end of several sentences when we think one thing or view has already been stated (I mean those sentences are already finished in logic, but not linguistic.). However, you did it well. Contact if you need more help in Chinese.
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Thank you both :). I learned a lot from both suggestions. Eva kept most of my words and fixed basic grammar, but George's suggestions were also great additions. I understood everything. Thanks again!
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Thoughts in Chinese
我今天学习过很多韩国语和汉语。我今天学了很长时间的韩语和汉语。
我要改善可是我不懂语法很好。可是我的语法不好，我要提高。
我喜欢学习。学习是很好玩。可是这是很困难。我喜欢学习（外语），学习（外语）很好玩。可是也很困难。
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