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Daylight of the evening

Unknowingly, I have fell fallen in love with piano music,. It doesn't mean that im I'm interested in playing piano, but (However) I really love to listen to it, especially when before going to sleep. I have searched for a lot of piano music from the internet, and I love this one best, "Daylight of the evening" by Kevin Lam, . I also love Zhang Yiyi's music, and much many others. :)
I don't know what piano music wants to express because it has no lyrics, but at least it lets (helps) me feel comfortable and relaxed in some cases.
Sometimes when you are tired of some things in daily life, the relaxing music can act as is a good friend indeed. :)

Overall it is very good and entertaining to read! However, I would write it as:

Unknowingly, I have fallen in love with piano music. This does not mean that I am interested in playing piano anytime soon. However, I really do love to listen to it, especially before going to sleep. I have searched for a lot of piano music online and I love this one most: "Daylight of the Evening". It's by Kevin Lam. I also love music by Zhang Yiyi and so many others!
I don't know what piano music tries to express to me because there are no lyrics; but at least it helps me to feel comfortable and relaxed in some cases. Piano music is like a good friend, relaxing you when you're tired of all the things you have to do in daily life.