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恐怖片加上一个科幻的结尾，这会使我晚上有个好梦....
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    November 4, 2011
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    Friday Morning~ Now is Friday Morning,the weather change cold,the winter will come,and I have some frustration. Since I come back from Canton have already past 1 week,I try my best to do my work,but still little success.I just remember I met my customer Leathy at the Canton fair,she enter my booth and excitedly said:" Lucy! I just found you have so many wonderful things!!" This word really turn me on,so I answer her:"Really,just look around,and I will quote for you~！" And then,Leathy walk out of my booth,and select a little Christmas adore from my neighbouring booth,and asked me:"what's the price!" Yes,she think it's all mine,and also yes,there are not have any wonderful items in my booth can attract Leathy. That's why I feel so down since I come back from the fair,my company not have good items,but I still need to work hard,but do the useless work....
    November 4, 2011
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    October 10, 2011
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    你好！我叫Sarah。可是我中文名字是石珍。我是美國女生。有媽媽，爸爸，弟弟，和一個很可愛的狗（叫 Monty）。我最好愛他。(Here you can say "我最爱他"to express you love your Monty best,the sentence "我最好爱他“ is meaning may be you not love Monty very much,but you think you really should do) 

    我不知道，我要寫什麼。我現在看電視。( The words"现在” is meaning now,and you should add another "在“ to express watching "在看”so this sentence should be "我现在在看电视）些個人做飯，別人吃菜，(里面 有个人在做饭，there  have one guy cooking)說，＂很不好！不吃好了！你門都要回家！＂平常不高興（I think you want to express not very happy,you can change the word "平常 （offten) " to "非常 （very much)"。我知道為什麼。我覺得他們的工作是，很不高興是。(you can take out the word "是“，then the sentence mean their work are not happy,also you can add a character "的”，like "很不高兴的“more like a chinese sentence!)haha 


    我想認識寫新人，所以你發給我電子郵件巴! 我很喜歡跟人聊天兒。你想幫我練習嗎？c:

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    October 10, 2011
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    About my job... Hi,I'm Lulu,and I'm a international trader,I export the home and holiday decors to many countries. Just like this month,I will take my cute Christmas decors to the 110th canton fair,to show them and sell them,hope can get a big success. And I have a little worried about my oral english,because they are not very well,especially when I feel nervous,I even can not make a sentence to express my idea in english,and also can not clear understand others' talk.. It's will be very horrible if really happening at that time,so this week I must hard work to learn english,like listening,spealing,writing,to make myself enter in a good condition,and then at the fair,I will be a kindly,smily, professional saler!! HAHA!!
    October 10, 2011
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    Vancouver

    我喜欢住Vancouver. Vancouver有很多人。大家这儿是高兴的人。（are you want to express there are many happy people，in chinese you can say:这儿的人很高兴）哪儿我住了，人是一点没有高兴。（“The place i lived past,there are not so many happy people” in chinese is 我过去住的地方，没有这么多高兴的人) 住在这儿我很高兴。我做新朋友(you can use the verb word" 交" not" 做" to express make new friends,交新朋友。），还有学新文化。

    可是Vancouver有东西我不喜欢。 天气的Vancouver (Vancouver 的天气 is the right Subject-predicate order ）不怎么样。这里下雨太多。 我喜欢雨，可是Vancouver还很冷。我比较喜欢穿裤子和毛衣，所以这个天气我应该喜欢？( you can add the word "but" here to express transition,但是 不是 but not）不是。呵呵。一个天 (I think may be you want to say "one day" here，the correct sentence is 有一天）,我觉得我适应 (will adapt  to 将适应）这个天气。我不知道。 ^^ 

    有晚一个好。（good night? 晚安  or  有个美好的晚上  have a wonderful night)
    ~爱娉

    Hope this can help you!

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    October 3, 2011
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    Try your best,you can type a so long sentence,how wonderful you are?

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    October 1, 2011
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    October 1, 2011
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    Some nervous thing.. Hi,I'm louise,and my own Chinese name is Lulu. Today,I do the international business with many foreign customers. We always contact in english vis email,I know my english is not very well,even have many mistake,but very lucky my customers can understood what I said.I so appreciate their help and support. But this month,I will attend a show at Canton,and meet my clients face to face,I'm very nervous cause I must try to understand their meaning bu ears,not only by eyes,also need to express what I want to say,I don't know if I can do a good job for this show,I hope I can...
    October 1, 2011
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    我出生在印度尼西亚和(You can only use the punctuation "," instead of the word "和"

    (现在 Now )居住在澳大利亚。

    由于我的背景(You can use " 祖籍" or "籍贯" here,means home town,family origin)是中国人，（所以 so) 我想可以讲(学习 learn)汉语。

     

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    October 1, 2011
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