高麗菜!!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, <strike>E</strike> everyone. My name is Amy and I come from China. I was born in Fujian province. I like English, so I want to improve my English here. My motto is "Where there's a will there's a way. In my life i am an easygoing, <strike>a little </strike>shy, hard working girl. I like watching movies,<strike>search</strike> browsing the internet, <strike>ang</strike> and I also like <strike>make</strike> making friends,and <strike>help</strike> helping people,and I'm a good liste<strike>n</strike>ner and so on.

// Nice job, keep up the practice!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,everybody! <img src="http://www.italki.com/fckeditor/editor/images/spacer.gif" style="background-image: url(http://www.italki.com/fckeditor/editor/skins/default/fck_strip.gif); background-position: 0px -704px; " class="TB_Button_Image" alt="" />
I am Muk, a boy from Zhengzhou, China, now <strike>study</strike> studying Software Engineering in Suchow. <strike>At most time of day</strike> For most of the day I am <strike>using</strike> use <strike>the</strike> my notebook . And at other times I will walk along the road or the small river . <strike>The</strike> life here is really dull and lonely.
If you want say something to me , you are welcome.
I have to type the code , that's all .

Hey Muk, first, thanks for helping me on my Chinese sentences, I know they were really bad! Let me know if you have any questions on the corrections I made here. 你有任何問題的話用英中文都可以!

凉面 is not the same as ramen. In the USA, ramen usually means 拉面 or sometimes even 泡面. 凉面 has many types, and usually in English we say "cool _____ noodles". For example, for 芝麻酱凉面 we would say "cool sesame noodles". Hope that helps!

Nuclear radiation particles

Infinitesimal radioactive aerosol was detected by local environmental authorities yesterday.

After the humiliated panic buying of salt，the public seemed calm now.

This sentence is almost correct, but the phrasing in the first clause is a bit strange. "Humiliated" is used to describe a person's feeling, but here it is describing "panic". Therefore you should change it to "humiliating" to show that the people who panicked were humiliated.

Next, "panic buying of salt" is also a bit strange, as "panic" is usually a noun, but here is it modifying "buying".

The whole sentence is better like this: "After the humiliating salt buying panic, the public seems calm now" (don't forget that if it is "now" you need present tense!)

I studied the <strike>measure values</strike> measurements although I knew nothing about the physical unit (I'm not sure what you mean by "physical unit").

The radiation did not even increase the background count on the radiation <strike>measuring </strike>meter ("measuring meter" is redundand, as a meter is something that measures!) .

It sounds OK, however I think I should stay <strike>in house</strike> at home for the next few days.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am<strike> a</strike> Chinese. I will graduate from college this year, but my English is very poor . I want to improve my English. I really hope to talk with others and read better. So I <strike>come</strike> came here <strike>and</strike> to request help . As a Chinese speaker, I can teach you Chinese at the same time . I want to <strike>ba</strike> be friends with you . Now I ask you : "Would you like to make friends with me?"

Good! 你打英文標點的時候, 後面不要打空間.