Nuclear radiation particles
Infinitesimal radioactive aerosol was detected by local environmental authorities yesterday.
After the humiliated panic buying of salt，the public seemed calm now.
I studied the measure values although I knew nothing about the physical unit.
The radiation did not even increase the background count on the radiation measuring meter.
It sounds OK, however I think I should stay in house for the next few days.
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Nuclear radiation particles
Infinitesimal radioactive aerosol was detected by local environmental authorities yesterday.After the humiliated panic buying of salt，the public seemed calm now.
This sentence is almost correct, but the phrasing in the first clause is a bit strange. "Humiliated" is used to describe a person's feeling, but here it is describing "panic". Therefore you should change it to "humiliating" to show that the people who panicked were humiliated.
Next, "panic buying of salt" is also a bit strange, as "panic" is usually a noun, but here is it modifying "buying".
The whole sentence is better like this: "After the humiliating salt buying panic, the public seems calm now" (don't forget that if it is "now" you need present tense!)
I studied the
The radiation did not even increase the background count on the radiation
It sounds OK, however I think I should stay
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杭州这里都检测到了，该回家避核辐射去了
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Hi kaly. Actually, the effect of particles is less than the radiation that we receive from the univers all the time, except you are near to the power plants here. Anyway the exectives of the electric company and the concerned persons should be strongly punished for almost no measures for tsunami. I feel sad about this..
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Sorry it's Gy.... just learn it,:P
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Take it easy.The value is below 0.1u Vy, 10-7. Chest scan will be more harmful.
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