Say No to Pirated Products

There has been <s>a</s> widespread discussion about pirated products. Beyond any dispute, it is absolutely wrong. But unfortunately, the phenomenon of pirating is very serious in today’s society.

What contributes to the phenomenon? From my personal perspective, I think the reasons may be as follows.<s>:</s> First, the price of pirated products is lower than the normal products because they save a lot of cost, such as the cost of advertisement, research, and development. Second, people’s awareness of protecting intellectual property rights is not enough. No one cares whether the cheaper products they use are pirated or not. <s>What products are cheaper what products are they use, no one care if it is pirated or not.</s> If we leave this as it is, then we will have nothing <s>that is</s> new to use.

What should we do to reduce <s>hit</s> pirated products? In my opinion <s>mind</s>, I feel the government should establish relevant laws and regulations <s>and it is urgent</s> to enhance our awareness of product intellectual property rights. Once these measures are taken, it will be reasonable <s>for us</s> to believe that the phenomenon will disappear in the near future.

Coronavirus kills twice as many <s>more </s>men as <s>than</s> women

More men are sacrificed by Coronavirus than women. Research shows that men are more likely to be infected by <s>with</s> the virus. Also, the mortality rate of men caused by the virus <s>of men</s> is twice <s>higher than</s> that of women. New York City announced that so far 43 out of every 100,000 men passed away, while only 23 out of every 100,000 women passed away, so <s>. So</s>, men are at a higher risk of severe cases and hospitalization<s> being severe and hospitalizing</s>. <s>But </s> However, this was not very surprising for researchers because this tendency was already seen in China and Italy. In both countries, male mortality was higher than female's. Some say the gender differences in behavior cause these results. For example, in most <s>of </s>countries more men tend to smoke than <s>compared to</s> women.

According to <s>a</s> Centers for Disease Control website<s> of Centers for Disease Control</s>, until the 6th (6th of what? 6th of April?) the number of coronavirus cases was 68,776. The older they were, the higher their mortality rate and <s>the</s> hospitalization <s>ing</s> rate <s>were</s>. The highest <s>points</s> rates were for 65 years old and 75 years old. The number of infected women was 712 out of 100,000, and for men it was 932. Also, men are more likely to be hospitalized. O On average, (use on average because you are using decimals in the following numbers) 140.3 out of 100,000 women and 228.7 out of 100,000 men were admitted to hospitals. The most remarkable gender difference is the mortality rate. A doctor in NY said, <s>says</s> “More than two-third of patients needing ventilators are men. I have never seen diseases that <s>which</s> show such big gender differences.” An organization announced that they assumed that 65% of the cases are men, although they don’t know the number clearly. When they were asked about the gap between gender, they answered, “We don’t know the reasons. Nobody knows so far.”

A Test

The current situation has <s>made</s> many people talking about many controversial topics. The changes of husbands' <s>'s</s> daily<s> life</s> lives (since you are talking about many different husband's lives) is one of them. People keep making jokes about husbands who are going through bad times with their wives during the lockdown. Those husbands are not welcomed by their wives to spend the whole day at home. Many couples fight <s> go through fighting</s> because of this issue. I will put this issue into perspective. I <s>will </s>take it seriously because I think that there are many hidden facts beyond that. When a couple goes through such an experience , it determines how strong their relationship is <s>is their relationship</s>. It also shows how patient <s>patiance</s> and kind they are towards each other. Having kids <s>Kids</s> would also be a main factor in this issue because it increases the difficulty for <s>on</s> married couples to get their happy ending at last. Couples who <s>will</s> fail overcoming these harsh times <s>, they</s> must think again about whom they have chosen to be their <s>thier</s> <s>long life </s> lifelong partner.

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In a modern society, more and more young people want to live in the city to achieve success. <s>Although </s>However, there are people who are convinced that urban life can cause huge harm to health, (two independent clauses so need a comma) so they move to the countryside.

First of all, the city <s>gives</s> has a lot of modern amenities.<s>, there</s> There are better medical services, infrastructure, and <s>and infrastructure</s> various places for entertainment. Moreover, there is more opportunity for self-realization,promotion, searching for a job in a specialty, and getting an education.Despite the fact that urban life pollutes the environment, people are trying to improve the situation and creating park zones to be closer to nature. ("trying" and "creating" both end in -ing so should be used together) <s>to be closer to the nature for this purpose they create park zones</s>.However, due to the large population, the city has a high crime rate, which is largely due to the fact that many people earn money in <s>a non-legal</s> illegal ways, and more people suffer from various mental illnesses. (The last sentence is grammatically correct, but can be split into smaller sentences. "However, due to the large population, the city has a high crime rate. This is largely due to the fact that many people earn money in illegal ways and suffer from various mental illnesses.") Another disadvantage is that people have to spend a lot of time on the road because of traffic jams and intense traffic (you can say "traffic jams and intense traffic" as just "intense traffic").

On the other hand, some people prefer to live far from the city noise and <s>rush, busy </s> the busy rush. The environmental situation in the village is much better than in the city because there are fewer buildings and less transport, which are<s> a</s> global problems (because you are talking about buildings and transport, so use plural) for the environment.In addition, people can enjoy the beauty of nature every day because they do not have to go far to do this. Furthermore, the village people have fewer health problems because they breathe fresh and clean air and eat natural food.However, for life in the countryside, the same things can happen every day so a person can get tired of such a slow, calm, and quiet life.

Thus, it is impossible to determine exactly where it is better to live . I believe that the ideal place to live depends on the personal preferences and character of each person.