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Coronavirus kills twice more men than women More men are sacrificed by Coronavirus than women. Research shows that men are more likely to be infected with the virus. Also, the mortality rate caused by the virus of men is twice higher than that of women. New York City announced that so far 43 out of 100,000 men passed away while only 23 out of women passed away. So, men risk being severe and hospitalizing. But this was not very surprising for researchers because this tendency was already seen in China and Italy. In both countries, male mortality was higher than female. Some say the gender differences in behavior cause these results. For example, in most of countries more men tend to smoke compared to women. According to a website of Centers for Disease Control, until the 6th the number of coronavirus cases was 68,776. The older they were, the higher their mortality rate and the hospitalizing rate were. The highest points were for 65 years old and 75 years old. The number of infected women was 712 out of 100,000 and men was 932. Also, men are more likely to hospitalize. 140.3 out of 100,000 women and 228.7 out of 100,000 men were admitted to hospitals. The most remarkable gender difference is the mortality rate. A doctor in NY says “more than two-third patient needs ventilators are men. I have never seen diseases which shows such big gender differences.” An organization announced that they assumed that 65% of the cases are men although they don’t know the number clearly. When they were asked about the gap between gender, they answered “we don’t know the reasons. Nobody knows so far.”

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Coronavirus kills twice as many men as women.

More men die due to Coronavirus than women. Research shows that men are more likely to be infected with the virus. Also, men's mortality rate due to the virus is double that of women. New York City announced that so far, 43 out of 100,000 male patients passed away while only 23 out of 100,000 women passed away. Data suggests that men have a higher risk of severe complications and hospitalization. But this was not very surprising for researchers who were aware of a similar trend in China and Italy. In both countries, the male mortality rate was higher. Some argue that certain gender differences have played a role. For example, in most countries men are more likely to be smokers.
According to the Centers for Disease Control's website, by April 6th the number of coronavirus cases in New York City was 68,776. Older patients were more likely to need hospitalization and had a higher mortality rate. Women were infected at a rate of 712 per 100,000 and men at a rate of 932 per 100,000. Men are also more likely to be hospitalized. On average, women were admitted to hospitals at a rate of 140.3 per 100,000 and men at a rate of 228.7 per 100,000. The most remarkable gender difference is the mortality rate. A doctor in NY says “more than two-third patient needs ventilators are men. I have never seen diseases which shows such big gender differences.” An organization estimated that 65% of coronavirus cases were men. When they were asked about the gap between genders, they answered “we don’t know the reasons. Nobody knows so far.”
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Coronavirus kills twice more as many men than as women

More men are sacrificed killed due to by Coronavirus than women. Research shows that men are more likely to be infected with the virus. Also, the mortality rate caused by the of the
virus in men is twice higher than that of women. New York City announced that so thus far 43 men per out of 100,000 men passed away while only 23 out of women per 100,000 passed away. SoAlso, men have a higher risk being of experiencing severe symptoms and requiring hospitalizing. hospitalisation. But this was not very surprising for researchers because this trend tendency was already seen in China and Italy. In both countries, male mortality was higher than that of females. Some say the that gender based differences in behavior causeare responsible for these results. For example, in most of countries more men tend to smoke compared to women.
According to a the website of Centers for Disease Control, until the 6th (of March or April) the number of coronavirus cases was 68,776. The older they were the population, the higher their the mortality rate and the rate of hospitalisation hospitalizing rate were. The highest points percentages were for those 65 years of age and older old and 75 years old. The number of infected women was 712 out ofper 100,000 and for men was 932. Also, men are more likely to be hospitalized. 140.3 out of per100,000 women and 228.7 out of per 100,000 men were admitted to hospitals. The most remarkable gender difference is in the mortality rate. A doctor in NY says “more than two-thirds of patients needs needing ventilators are men. I have never seen diseases which shows such big gender differences.” An organization announced that they assumed that 65% of the cases are men although they don’t know the number clearly accurately. When they were asked about the gap between gender, they answered “we don’t know the reasons. Nobody knows so far.”
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Coronavirus kills twice as many more men as than women

More men are sacrificed by Coronavirus than women. Research shows that men are more likely to be infected by with the virus. Also, the mortality rate of men caused by the virus of men is twice higher than that of women. New York City announced that so far 43 out of every 100,000 men passed away, while only 23 out of every 100,000 women passed away, so . So, men are at a higher risk of severe cases and hospitalization being severe and hospitalizing. But However, this was not very surprising for researchers because this tendency was already seen in China and Italy. In both countries, male mortality was higher than female's. Some say the gender differences in behavior cause these results. For example, in most of countries more men tend to smoke than compared to women.
According to a Centers for Disease Control website of Centers for Disease Control, until the 6th (6th of what? 6th of April?) the number of coronavirus cases was 68,776. The older they were, the higher their mortality rate and the hospitalization ing rate were. The highest points rates were for 65 years old and 75 years old. The number of infected women was 712 out of 100,000, and for men it was 932. Also, men are more likely to be hospitalized. O On average, (use on average because you are using decimals in the following numbers) 140.3 out of 100,000 women and 228.7 out of 100,000 men were admitted to hospitals. The most remarkable gender difference is the mortality rate. A doctor in NY said, says “More than two-third of patients needing ventilators are men. I have never seen diseases that which show such big gender differences.” An organization announced that they assumed that 65% of the cases are men, although they don’t know the number clearly. When they were asked about the gap between gender, they answered, “We don’t know the reasons. Nobody knows so far.”

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