Need help from native english speakers Look at theese text and help me to make it better. Does something look wrong? Any help will be great. BTW, I am not one of theese peope, I just do translation for them. "Immortality - the lot of the brave! This Saturday, at 2 p.m those transhumanists who are not afraid to express their desire to live forever are gathering at The Square of the Revolution. I'll be one of them and I think that some of you, the bravest and most worthy of immortality, will join us too. Why is it necessary? The fact is that if we're not talking about our desire to get something, we do not get it. Society is not ready to give us immortality, it does not fund research on slowing aging, creating artificial organs, improving medical management of metabolism. Such funding does not exist! It does not exist because you do not need it. The way to demand it is to go to a meeting or demonstration, and publicly declare your position. In any democratic country, including our country, people have the right to declare their position. They have the right to do it, to go to the the streets with posters and to demand from society, to demand from everyone, to make their interests taken into account. And we should do it. Because otherwise the society will consist of mortalists who want me and you buried or burned out in stoves. We do not want to give people this right! But now, by default, if you die, you die at all. If you are sick, the medicine spits on you. And this happens because the value of human life, which seems to be in the first place is actually unsupported. We go to the meeting to change it, to increase value of human life in our country. Unlimited, interesting, full life with improved human abilities, with conversion to transhuman and posthuman. We say this openly! We will pursue not only the right to live indefinitely, but the ability to live indefinitely. This meeting is the first step! We are waiting for you!"