Nanny's notebook entry: Feb 10, 2011

Hello, today is a beautiful day to walk in the park.... but i'm lazy... haha. XOXO

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like English and am fond of American pop music and films. This is why I want to improve my English.

White poem

Corrections are appreciated, though i must admit it ill be alittle tricky to fit them in the same size :)

I put my palms together again
And feel a tremble inside-
Some weightless living thing with no name
Is wishing so much for a flight!

I'm walking along the old evening square,
Some man hardly hiding a grin;
My hair unbound, my feet are bare,
And happiness fillls me within.

Finally, leaning a heavy street pole
I'm letting my wonder outside...
A white butterfly, little flattering soul,
Would never go off from my mind.

(I tried to make it a little more natural while leaving the rhyming intact, I hope this helps)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi,my name is Yan Yan. I am a Senior Three student. I did not learn English, so I have joined italki to improve my English.

my profile

Hello! I'm Veronica from Shanghai, China; I want to improve my language level with native speakers. My English isn't good, I speak a little Japanese and I'm just a beginner in German and Spanish, haven't been able to talk in these two yet, if you can help me, or if you are puzzled with Chinese learning, do not hesitate to contact me. Let's share our techniques of study~~

(I moved things around a little because I feel it fits together slightly better this way, but very little actual correction was needed. All in all your grammar was good, just try to remember apostrophes and that after a comma or stop, to put a space)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I study English because I need it for my job, and the whole world speaks English. If you want to think yourself smart, you need know English.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like English, and find it to be a beautiful language.