White poem
Corrections are appreciated, though i must admit it ill be alittle tricky to fit them in the same size :)
I'm putting my palms together again
And feeling a tremble inside-
Some weightless alive liitle thing with no name
IIs wishing so much for a flight!
I'm walking along the old evening square,
Some man's hardly hiding a grin;
My hair's got loosen, my feet are just bare,
But happiness fillls me within.
And finally, leaning a heavy street pole
I'm letting my wonder outside
.. A white butterfly, little flattering soul,
Would never go off from my mind.
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wow, que bonito esta, es alimento para el alma
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I like it!!!!!
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White poem
Corrections are appreciated, though i must admit it ill be alittle tricky to fit them in the same size :)I put my palms together again
And feel a tremble inside-
Some weightless living thing with no name
Is wishing so much for a flight!
I'm walking along the old evening square,
Some man hardly hiding a grin;
My hair unbound, my feet are bare,
And happiness fillls me within.
Finally, leaning a heavy street pole
I'm letting my wonder outside...
A white butterfly, little flattering soul,
Would never go off from my mind.
(I tried to make it a little more natural while leaving the rhyming intact, I hope this helps)
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