Note: yellow are words I added, purple is a tip or different way that is also ok. I also want to disclaim, I am not a English teacher, so I'm not sure if my corrections are acceptable. I did my best to make this notebook entry more natural and slightly formal. If there are any mistakes I made, please do correct them. :)

This is a <s>really</s> real story. <s>Since</s> After I heard of <s>what he said </s>his story (It's better if you introduce who you are talking about or how he is related to you. For example, "after I heard my friend John's story), I <s>really</s> <s>feel</s> felt like writing something for him. He is having <s>the</s> a hope <s>to</s> for his future, which is unbelievable since that positive sense would appear on that person's face (I'm sorry, I couldn't fully understand what you meant). He was a criminal and <s>was</s> served 21 years in prison since he was 15.

So, you guys may be confused about why <s>the </s>a guy like this could <s>got</s> be positive about his future? The reason is, he got in a place called The Full Circle Auto Repair and Training Center, where almost all the people working there <s>almost are</s> <s>are individuals who were</s> have been previously incarcerated. The aim of this program is just one: to <s>really</s> transform pre-criminals into residents, give them a chance to get into society.

The program trains them to be auto mechanics, certificates them, and then find them jobs in the community, dealerships and <s>in</s> local garages to help them build a career. Moreover, the program <s>really</s> pays them by the <s>times </s>hours they work; as ordinary workers.

The reason why the program <s>began</s> begin is because in America, over two million people are currently incarcerated and more than 600,000 are released from prison every year. Close to seventy-five percent <s>of them </s>would get back in prison within five to eight years because <s>they</s> many are <s>gonna be</s> sent back to the neighborhood where they committed a crime. <s>plus this</s>, Also, they <s>always</s> will always <s>be</s> have difficulty getting a job because they were criminals before, let alone they did not have the skills to make a living. This program <s>really</s> has helped and is continuing to <s>helping </s> help many confused souls.

I think( or "believe") <s>of it as</s> this program is doing a really meaningful thing and if I had the chance, I would <s>definitely</s> want to try to give <s>a hand to them</s> them a hand. What do you think about it?

Director Ang Lee showed us a real Chinese family in the movie "Eat Drink Man Woman". Describing four meals in an old and big house where a father and his four daughters live together. However, the movie is more than the dishes. In each meal, there will be a family member who announces that they are going to leave the house and start a new life due to their career or spouse. When I thought the father has to face an empty house because all his daughters are leaving, he announces even more surprising news - he will marry a girl who is the same age as his daughters.

Ang Lee muses on the nature of home which has inspired this famous and excellent film. I'm truly happy to have been able to watch this lovely movie.

Although I don't consider my English to be as good as an English teacher's, I did my best to correct and make your summary sound more natural and a little more proper. 😅 But your original writing is already very good also!

If this doesn't sound right, anyone, please do help correct it. 😄