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eat drink man woman hi guys here's my composition, can you help me correct it? 😁tnx!!!❤️ Ang Lee showed us a real Chinese family in the movie "eat.drink.man.woman". Describing 4 meals in the old and big house where the father and his four daughters live together, the movie is more than dishes. In each meal there will be a family member who announces that they are going to leave this house and start a new life, due to career or spouse. When I thought the father has to face a empty house because all his daughters are leaving, he announces a even more surprising news--he will marry a girl in his daughter's age. Ang Lee's musings on the nature of home inspire this famous and excellent film, it's lucky that I watched it.

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Director Ang Lee showed us a real Chinese family in the movie "Eat Drink Man Woman". Describing four meals in an old and big house where a father and his four daughters live together. However, the movie is more than the dishes. In each meal, there will be a family member who announces that they are going to leave the house and start a new life due to their career or spouse. When I thought the father has to face an empty house because all his daughters are leaving, he announces even more surprising news - he will marry a girl who is the same age as his daughters.
Ang Lee muses on the nature of home which has inspired this famous and excellent film. I'm truly happy to have been able to watch this lovely movie.


Although I don't consider my English to be as good as an English teacher's, I did my best to correct and make your summary sound more natural and a little more proper. 😅 But your original writing is already very good also!
If this doesn't sound right, anyone, please do help correct it. 😄

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