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- わたしのへや 大学のりょうのななかいにへやがあります。 My bedroom is on the 7th floor of my university's dormitory. おおきいへやです。 It is a large bedroom. かべはしろいです。ドアはあおいです。 The walls are white. The door is blue. ドアのみぎにかっしょくとくろいクロセットがあります。クロセットのよこにシンクがあります。シンクの上にかがみがあります。 At the door's right, there is a brown and black closet. Beside the closet, there is a sink. Above the sink, there is a mirror. シンクのまえにしろいれいぞうこがあります。れいぞうこのみぎにかっしょくつくえがあります。れいぞうことつくえの上にたないたがあります。それにつくえのうえにでんわとコンピューターがあります。 In front of the sink, there is a white fridge. To the fridge's right, there is a brown desk. Above the fridge and the desk, there are shelves. Moreover, there is a phone and a computer on the desk. つくえのとなりにテーブルがあります。テーブルの上いろいろなものがあります。テーブルの下にごみばこがあります。つくえとテーブルのちかくにベージュとあおいいすがあります。 Beside the desk is a table. On the table, there is various things. Under the table, there is a garbage can. Near the desk and the table is a beige and blue chair. テーブルのうしるにまどがあります。テーブルのみぎにベッドがあります。わたしのベッドはくろいとはいいろです。 Behind the table are windows. To the table's right, there is a bed. My bed is black and grey. ベッドとドアのあいだにベージュとあおいひじかけいすがあります。 Between the bed and the door, there is a beige and blue chair.May 28, 201130
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm a graduate student in cognitive psychology.
But my English skill is poor, so I want it my English skill to improve.
I don't know if these sentences are correct or incorrect. Please help me.
Overall, I would say your English isn't so bad... This being said, here is an explication of my correction.
First of all, you need a capital letter at the beginning of languages or nationalities. This is why "ensligh" is wrong and "English" correct.
Second, we usually say that we want to improve skills, which means to get better at something.
Third, "if" is for conditional clauses, like wheter or not your sentences were correct.
Finally, because you have more than one sentence, you need to use "these" instead of "this".
I hope this helped you. :)
0 votedMay 27, 20111My dream is to be a global manager like Matsusita Kounosuke or Steve Jobs. For this reason, I belong to an international exchange circle and a business circle, and my abilities have been brushed up. I also study foreign cultures and I have many foreign friends. I have come to communicate with friends in different countries, using easy (Did you mean only English?) English. International students who came to Japan said that oneself grows up by going abroad to study and experience a different lifestyle and acquire new knowledge, not to mention the language ability. Moreover, they got important friends and they say that I should do the same because going abroad to study becomes a really good experience. Therefore, I think that I cannot communicate fluently with people with high degree of English or Chinese unless I study abroad.
Furthermore, I am trying to set up business with my friends in my business circle. I established it with my friends and we did various activities last year. In order to achieve the target of establishing the Net business, we acquired various experiences. It was made the awareness of me to meet the member of society who established actually, and having neither the skill to still establish it nor the experience. (I don’t understand what you are trying to say…) I don’t have the confidence and desire for that, though I was at a point where I had to lead my companions as the representative of the circle. So this project will fall through unless I have abilities or experiences as a leader. So far, I haven’t experienced anything special. I took the safer way in my life. Of course, if I stay in Japan all the time, I can spend a safer life. But, to be a leader of a company, I think I must experience new things with different people and in another environment. Thinking so, it is important for me to study abroad when I am 19. Also, I must study in China which is the most important country in the world concerning economics. Though there are many programs of studying in China, this program is the best of all. I can study English and Chinese. I can also study Asian Business with excellent partners. Moreover I can go study in two marvelous universities. Other programs do not have the possibility to go to study in two universities as a part of only one program. I want to participate in this program at any cost. Through this studying abroad, my aim is to acquire important skills to be a global manager.0 votedFebruary 24, 20110
