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    朋友们，请帮忙我修改作文<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">“</s>《乱砍滥伐<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">”</s>》

    森林资源对人<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">们</s>类生存<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">来说</s>而言<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">是</s>非常重要<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的资源</s>。森林不仅是人们生活的好<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>帮手，也是<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">对</s>改善环境<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">进行改善</s>的重要<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>资源。
    众所周知，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">尽管</s>树木可以吸收二氧化碳，制造氧气，不仅能够净化空气<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>、调节空气湿度，还有固定土壤<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>、防风<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>、美化环境等作用，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">众所周知</s>尽管如此，可是现在乱砍滥伐现象却依旧比比皆是。
    乱砍滥伐有几个原因<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">。</s>，其主要原因是利益驱<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">动</s>使。
    森林资源非常珍贵，导致木材价格不断<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">地</s>上涨，所以很多人在利益驱使下<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">对</s>大量砍伐森林资源<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 102);">进行砍伐</s>。木材需求与日俱增，供需矛盾突出，加之销赃渠道<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">较</s>又多。
    此外，还有一<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">个原因</s>点<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">。</s>，那就是人们的文化素<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">质</s>养都<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">比较</s>普遍偏低，在法律意识方面也比较淡薄，这样就使得很多人认为可以<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">按照自己的需求进行</s>随心所欲地（OR 无节制地）采伐（OR 认为采伐可以不受约束）。
    林区面积<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">都较大，</s>覆盖范围较广，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">进行</s>难以监管<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">很难</s>。
    这<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">些原因</s>一切导致了乱砍滥伐现象非常普遍。其结果是：生态<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">不平</s>失衡<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">；</s>、臭氧层越来越薄<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>、氧气变少<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">~</s>、二氧化碳增加<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>、 水土流失等。
    对此，我们能<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">采取</s>做什么<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">措施</s>？私以为，应该从重处罚乱砍滥伐林木违法犯罪行为。无论是谁，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">犯了罪都要受到惩罚</s>严惩不贷。<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">通过</s>再辅以社会和舆论监督，加大森林资源的监管力度。
    我觉得，减少乱砍滥伐现象是当务之急。为了我们的环境更美好，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">而</s>让我们一起来监督，保护大自然。
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    May 18, 2020
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    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">过节日穿异性服装</s>
    异装过节

    在变装出现以前，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">已经几个世纪</s>男<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">人和</s>女<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">人</s>间在节日聚会<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">当</s>中<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">交</s>互换性别角色的现象就已有数个世纪的历史，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">在表演范围内和表演范围外</s>不论是在台上还是台下。当时的<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">当局</s>政府对此有时<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">候</s>置之不理<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">这个现象</s>，但<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">是</s>有时<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">候它</s>也会严格禁止<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">它</s>，因为性别混乱<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">同时</s>也在一定程度上意味着社会<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">被打乱了</s>秩序的失调。虽然“穿异性服装”<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">跟</s>不等同于“变装”<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">不一致</s>，但它已发展成了“变装”<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">发展</s>的一部分，所以它“穿异性服装”的相关物件也会在这个展<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">览</s>会上出现<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">被展出</s>。

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    May 16, 2020
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    May 7, 2020
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    澳洲的情况

    由于世界上<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">传染的</s>新<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>病毒肆虐，今年所有的国家都<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">经</s>过得艰难<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">过的时间</s>。
    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">从</s>3月底以来，政府就<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">定了</s>不允许<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">让</s>人们在餐厅<s style="color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>、酒吧，以及咖啡厅<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">吃和喝</s>堂食，只能<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">打包东西</s>外带。
    不过现在<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>情况<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">比较</s>有所好转<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">了。</s>，新增病例越来越<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">低了</s>少。
    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">盼</s>希望下个月，我们可以跟家<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">庭或者</s>人朋友<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">们</s>在餐厅<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">里</s>一起享用美食，共度<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">受</s>幸福<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>时<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">间</s>光<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，吃美食</s>。

    Your composition is good, I'm just make it be concise.
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    May 7, 2020
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    It's not just means extremely bright, it usually refers to something is too shiny, too dazzling due to the reflection of the light, especially specular reflection. Hence, a bald head, a smooth surface of a car, a squeaky clean window, they all can be '瓦亮'. And unfortunately you can't use this separately. The most common one is '锃光瓦亮'.
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    April 30, 2020
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    朋友们，请帮忙我修改短文<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">“</s>《五一节<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">”</s>》

    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">明天在俄罗斯春天和劳动节日庆祝。这个节日有长的历史。</s>
    明天是劳动节，举国庆祝，在俄罗斯又叫“春天的节日”，(Not everyone, especially foreigner, awares of the alias of this holiday, Russian's spring comes later than other countries due to the latitude)这个节日有一定历史了。(“一定”means a certain amount；“长久”means long time from now to the future in general；“悠久”means something's ancient from hundreds years to even more than thounds years, 1900-2020 wasn't so long to use such a word;“很长” actually wasn't grammatically wrong here, it just sounds not nature enough)

    1900年<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">五</s>5月<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">一</s>1日(Keep the digits in same type)，俄罗斯的工人第一次举行了群众游行大会。他们提出了“八小时工作日”<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">、</s>“打倒专制制度”等口号<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">。</s>；而<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">在</s>苏联时代，五一节的口号变成了“一切权力归苏维埃！”<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>“和平、劳动、五月！”<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">。</s>，人们则穿<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">好看的衣服</s>得漂漂亮亮的，带着气球、鲜花<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">儿、</s>和红旗就去<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">参加</s>游行了。

    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">今天</s>现如今，五月一日<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">是</s>已成法定<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">休</s>节假日，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">这个节日</s>劳动节的<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">差不多没有</s>政治色彩(OR 政治层面上的意义)<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的意思</s>早已淡化<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">。</s>，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">亲人和朋友团聚</s>走亲访友是大多数人的选择，去<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">往郊外去</s>乡间别墅<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">，</s>烤个肉(郊外≈乡间, they have similar meaning；“个”doesn't possess any certain meaning here, just sounds natrue in colloquial，OR “烤烤肉”, it will sounds like saying something cozy)，享受着初春的暖意和自由的一(Just need a Adj. here,use any words you like)天。

    对我来说，五一节，(Use a comma to pause, try to speaking the sentence and feel this pause)是一个<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">跟家人一起过</s>阖家欢乐的<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">一天</s>日子、，也是个不错的契机，可以让我回到乡间别墅，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">去收拾</s>打理菜<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">园</s>地，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">和</s>好生休息<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的借口</s>。

    Nicely done. Almost correct, I’m just altered something trivial to embellish.
    Just mix up more transition words to create lexical chain, which is a cohesion enhencer of an article. Besides, you should pay more attention to punctuation in any Chinese text when you come across next time, too much period looks strange to native speakers.
    In addition, try to divide different meaning into different paragraph, which would become more easily to read.
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    April 30, 2020
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    Do you believe the better days? Does everybody believe the better days？ It's an issue I came up with recently. I've always been thinking that all the people has a faith with better days. But lately I noticed the people all around the world may doesn't reckon this. Virus propagating fiercely nowadays, everyone was in panic. Besides, regional conflicts has no sign of stopping at all. The war, the disease, the pandemic, the poverty, so many discords covered the world. It used to be no hope in backward countries, but it seems changed from these days, a plenty of advanced countries encountered massive catastrophes in aspects of economy, society, and also infects individuals in bad direction. Moreover, a lot of countries has a negative growth in population and GDP. What the faith to the future in the world would be? God may knows, but depend on our action.
    March 22, 2020
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    <s>将来</s>未来的生活

    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">一位</s>就算预言家<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">都不知道</s>无法预知<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">我们真实</s>真正的<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">将来</s>未来。可是看今天时,我们可以想象将来（但我们依旧可以通过今日的种种去畅想未来）。
    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">一些人是</s>乐观者, <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">他们</s>认为技术的进步改善人们的生活，引领未来,<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">另一些人是</s>悲观者,<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">他们</s>认为技术的进步终会<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">有</s>引起核灾难，招致毁灭。而我，是一个梦想家，自然也是一个<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">和</s>乐观者。
    我认为，技术发展会<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">导致再</s>极大地提高人们的生活<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>质量。互联网的兴起，会取代<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">替</s>很多旧技术,但是人们终将会明白，互联网<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">换不了别的</s>是代替不了人的<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">们</s>。人们会意识到<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">东西</s>事物真正的<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">价格</s>价值所在。书所传递的价值或许高于<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">或为比</s>汽车<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">贵。</s>，跟朋友<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">谈谈</s>聊聊天，或许<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">为</s>比看电视<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">最</s>更<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">好</s>有意义。
    <s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">由丁</s>或许以后有了远程传送机<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">发明了</s>,<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">将来卖主会从一家商店到别的商店瞬息地转寄货物</s>（仓库与商店之间实现了货物的瞬间传送）<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">。</s>，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">所以</s>人们无需<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">不要</s>等待<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);"> 管送</s>,<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">在</s>随便<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>找一家小饭馆<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">可</s>就能吃到各种各样的饭菜,<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">在</s>随便<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">的</s>进一家服装店就能买<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">吃</s>到各种各样的衣服。空中公<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">共汽车</s>交会取代<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">替</s>传统公<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">共汽车</s>交,运动<s>比赛</s>和竞技会取代<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">替</s>战争和冲突。人们<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">学会</s>将明白保护自然<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">界</s>的重要性,<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">培育多</s>栽花<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">园</s>种草，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">和森</s>植树造林。
    我相信，<s style="background-color: rgb(187, 187, 187);">将</s>在未来，人们的生活将更加幸福。
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    March 22, 2020
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    ①Grammatically, I don't know why “乱七八糟极了” was wrong, but indeed, it sounds weird from a native speaker.

    '乱七八糟' as an idiom we often used it alone, there wasn't any adjective around it in most cases.
    The adjective will make a word more expressive. But a lot of Chinese idiom were already been enforced by itself. “乱”“遭” means mess, “乱七八糟” means everything was messed up. Similar to the 'at sixes and sevens' in English. It's already totally messy. So we don't use '极了' or other adjectives to enhance the word meaning again, because it's already contained that meaning itself.

    examples:
    <ol><li>你也不好好收拾下房间，看看这一地的书，乱七八糟的</li><li class="ql-indent-1">You should tidy up your room. Look at the books scattered on the floor, it's a disaster.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">乱七八糟 = completely messy</li><li class="ql-indent-1">'你也不' here means '你应该'(You should) OR '你为什么不'(Why don't you)</li><li class="ql-indent-1">For instance. 你手机屏幕都碎成那样了，也不去修一修。Your cell's screen was broken into such severe situation, it needs repair.</li><li>这剧本写的什么东西，乱七八糟的</li><li class="ql-indent-1">What the hell is this script, make no sense!</li><li class="ql-indent-1">乱七八糟 = lacking logic</li><li>家里进贼了，被翻得乱七八糟的</li><li class="ql-indent-1">My house was messed up because a burglar broke in.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">乱七八糟 = the things goes everywhere</li><li class="ql-indent-1">“翻”here means 'rummage', the burglar throw the clothes and stuff out of the closet or drawer roughly when rummage something valuable</li><li>装修各种乱七八糟的收费，真的让我头大</li><li class="ql-indent-1">A variety of fees/charges in decoration drive me nuts.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">乱七八糟 = different variation/type/style/genre seems in disorder (will be a bother)</li><li class="ql-indent-1">“头大” means been annoying when faced some hard issue</li><li>生病了就去看医生，不要相信网上那些乱七八糟的说法</li><li class="ql-indent-1">If you're ill, go to hospital instead of trust hearsay on the internet.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">乱七八糟 = something (in mess) not reliable</li><li>电话会议把我的休假搞得乱七八糟</li><li class="ql-indent-1">Teleconference has ruined my vacation.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">You see, similarly, I don't need to say 'irreparably destroy', because the word 'ruin' is already contain that meaning itself.</li></ol>

    ②Both are correct.
    他打球的时候手机摔坏了。（√）
    他打球的时候摔坏了手机。（√）

    Actually the first one is：他打球的时候（把）手机摔坏了 OR WITH COMMA： 他打球的时候，手机摔坏了。


    ③This sentence is incorrect.
    你的房间又好又怎么样？（×）

    怎么样 = how, what about, how about
    又 = as well as, and, again
    你的房间又好? = Is your room and nice?
    你的房间又怎么样 = Is your room and how?
    你的房间又好有又怎么样 = Is your room nice and how?
    This sentence looks '乱七八糟的'.

    Examples:
    <ol><li>你的房间怎么样，它很好吗？</li><li class="ql-indent-1">How's your room, is it nice?</li><li>你的房间（又）宽敞又安静，真好。</li><li class="ql-indent-1">You room is spacious and peaceful, that's nice.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">You can omit the first '又' when there is two '又' in a sentence.</li><li class="ql-indent-1">You can use more than two '又' but it may not formal. </li><li class="ql-indent-1">For instance, 他又矮又胖又丑，还口臭，恶心。 He is short, fat, ugly, and has bad breath, that's gross.</li><li>你又一次来到我房间，这次的设计怎么样，满意吗？看看！整洁又美观！</li><li class="ql-indent-1">You come to my house again, how do you think about the design this time, does it satisfy you?Behold! It's uncluttered and artistic!</li></ol>

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    November 28, 2019
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